|Reviews for Ordinary Girl|
| whitelotus1994 chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
This story is amazing. I love it a lot. I wish there will be a sequel because we don't even know if they end up together at the end. And plus, I think Mark deserves a love interest. He earned it. I love Mark. He's my favorite character. He's so cool. You're a very good writer. Keep up the good work. Your stories are awesome. :)3
| This Username Is Classified chapter 20 . 7/23/2016
Woah, this plot is good!
| KitKat Donut chapter 22 . 4/24/2016
The story was SO GOOD. I liked the humor too. :D I really want a sequel but there's probably nothing else to write about.
| CraziOtaku200 chapter 22 . 4/22/2016
This was amazing! I couldn't stop reading this! All nighters are worth it for this! The conflict and how it was solved was nice, and the way the characters acted were pretty natural. But I have a question, where are the pokemonz? ;-; you only mentioned them. XD eh, the romance was AWESOME though. Keep it up!
| Fprmr1 chapter 22 . 2/28/2016
Hey, I'm super glad you eventually finished! That's what all of us authors promise to our readers right? To finish our stories. You stuck it out, and it happened, no matter how long xD
The ending was very fitting, and Drew singing the song that they worked together on was an incredibly sweet way to wrap it all up. My favorite part was when Drew was so surprised he had to stop singing for a little bit and have Mark cover his ass just so he could continue singing.
Great job for an amazing story. You must be so proud of all that you have accomplished and all of the hours of writing you put into it.
| master girl chapter 22 . 2/25/2016
wow awesome i had read like all pop ,bad organization,revenge, betrayal .i had never read a fanfic like this but you know what this wasnt half bad.i liked luck for your more fics,were are waiting for them dont keep writing fics for u me and everyone who reads LLLLLUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKK!
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 22 . 1/2/2016
| KurunaGirl chapter 21 . 1/2/2016
AHH I pressed the submit button but apparently I can't post 2 reviews for the same chapter? I'm not really used to the updated site yet...
Well, yeah, I had this backlog of fanfiction update emails but BAM I recognised this title right off the bat XD I think I'm repeating myself but I'm happy that this great story has finally come to a solid conclusion! And I loved the cheesy ending of 'Never say never' because I'm a sucker for lines like this. I hope you've enjoyed taking up fanfiction again and I'll definitely be here to review when you update your other stories (if you're ever up to it!)
Let's chat some more sometime, okay?
| KurunaGirl chapter 22 . 1/2/2016
A beautiful closing chapter to end this story on a great note :)
Time really flies, doesn't it? It's already been 5 years aha. Your improvement in writing is really significant! Here's some cookies for you~~
I remember reading this story wayyy back in 2011 and liking all the banter between May and Drew. They had their share of drama in these chapters but lots of cute moments as well :D
As time passes, we move on in life I guess *sighs* and move towards new interests. I'm sorry for vanishing off fanfiction for years. However, I had a random urge to check my fanfiction email today and voila~! a new chapter from a story whose title still stayed in my head.
| miss ASSASSIN MASTER chapter 22 . 11/1/2015
Thank u sooooooo much. This was great. Luv it luv u
| LeafGreenShipper chapter 21 . 10/9/2015
Not trying to be rude but, um, well, IT'S BEEN TWO FREAKING YEARS AND YOU SAID 'THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE OUT SOON! Why you lie to your loyal viewers?
| VexoMenza chapter 21 . 5/12/2015
The last chapter should be out "...soon!" they said. It's been three years! I'm a new reader, and I'm surprised that I hadn't discovered this story sooner. It's an amazing fanfic, and I would absolutely love it if you could continue working on the final chapter. If you have any ideas for the sequel that you mentioned in the bottom AN, I would definitely read it. So please don't give up on this fanfic!
If the inspiration there wasn't enough, here's some actual input on the way it was written. Most fanfics that I like, I deal with the bad spelling and grammar. But this one... it has an amazing plot, AND it's well written. Even if the characters are OOC, the way you write them makes it flow perfectly with the story. I was left mentally squealing a couple times because of how cute it was. Know that I don't often review on stories (in my opinion, favorites and follows are how I judge a story), but seeing how long it had taken to update, I think you need a little push. :P So don't even think about abandoning this story when you still have fans waiting for this next chapter!
| astorii chapter 21 . 1/9/2015
PLEASE UPDATE! Because three years later is totally soon. But pretty please? I know you're writing it from what your profile which was updated semi recently last year. It was so good! Please make a sequel. It's just so different from other Contestshipping stories I've read. Okay, rant over. See ya and byes!
| Warrior of Hope chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
BEST CONTEST FIC I HAVE EVER READ! PLEASE FINISH IT :D lol I finished it, and needed another place to review
| Warrior of Hope chapter 21 . 10/30/2014
PLEASE FINISH IT! I'M BEGGING YOU :'(