|Reviews for The Best Plan Ever: Ten Steps to Sexual Prowess|
| zfj chapter 1 . 2/26
Good one-shot. Ending was a little rushed IMO, but it was a one-shot, so no worries. I cannot imagine Gohan having sex before with three others! Haha. Who knew Gohan to be so naughty. Guess he had so much pent up sexual frustration lol. Thanks for the good read!
| TitanSteel chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
oooohhh! yeah best plan ever indeed. good story, really good. I would definitely like to read a sequel or hell, a complete series of it.
| gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
| Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
| KiSwordsman chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
I got to say, this is really well done. Good build up, believable motivation, good characterization, Just overall great. It's really sad to say that finding a good story like this with all that PLUS a good lemon is an extreme rarity when talking about fanfiction based on the Dragonball franchise. My one gripe which is really kind of a nitpick is the fact that the resolution was a bit cheesy.
However, I can understand that given it only being a one-shot.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
I enjoyed the smut, though both Gohan and Videl are somewhat OOC. I also don't like Gohan having been with girls before Videl...GRR. THAT just irks me but all in all, good story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
that was great
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
:p i think i melted.
| Queenies chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
XD i loved your fanfic. Ur a great writer.
| jay-jay chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
I dont... nah...
| Pizzadude5665 chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
gohan is a total beast in this story
| Gohans Videl chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
The fic was nice. Well I had never pictured Gohan that harsh or Videl that uncouth, deadly or mean . Videl never had too much attitude , but the fic was nice .
| wtf chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Dude you mad videl a bitch in this story
| WakeUp chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I'm gunna' be honest, I didn't expect much from this story...however, it was beautifully written and all the characters were in the perfect mindset! This was portrayed perfectly, I can see this as the start of their relationship with no problem. I am begging you, write a sequel, or at least a few more chapters. I was reading this on my Ipad and I couldn't put it down, my friend had to remind me that we were watching a movie! Just amazing, and the smut scene was great too! ;)
| serenityselena chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
interesting story :)