Reviews for Pocket Change
Pictureshow chapter 32 . 3/11/2013
I keep looking at this cursor, blink blink blinking at me and I am afraid I do not have the words to articulate how much I loved this story. I have never reviewed a fix before and I'm probably going to do this all wrong, but I'm going to do it anyways. There isn't a single word I would change in this. I don't think I have never connected to a character in any book, fanfic, newspaper article, or tv campaign as much as I have with the Bella you wrote. Thank you, for having the courage to write down the sad story with the happy ending.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 32 . 3/6/2013
Very intense. Complicated and conflicted. The way life is.
Klee119 chapter 32 . 3/4/2013
There are many really good stories on fanfic. Without intending to be disrespectful, there are many stories that didnt pan out like I'd hoped. For me, there are many that start out great and go past their prime and I lose interest. There are many in which I start paying more attention to grammatical errors and typos that to the story (which is wrong because I stink at spelling and grammar).
Your story was perfection to me. It was angsty, emotional, and so well written. I loved your references to actual events. I think you were very respectful and you also gave me great insight into how very psychologically damaging these tragedies can be to those involved on any level. Sometimes we push those events to the back corners of our minds to make room for our everyday lives and while we can't lose ourselves to them, we most certainly need to remember a little more often-at least I do.
I wondered how you would continue the story after they reunited. You accomplished this in such a wonderful way. You did Harper Lee proud. Thank you so much for keeping this story up. I am so fortunate have had the chance to read it. Best Wishes.
Ariann chapter 32 . 3/3/2013
This is the only story that has made me cry more than the Harry potter series. Thank you for such a beautiful story.
H chapter 32 . 3/3/2013
I have had this bookmarked for so long and only just remembered about it, I've read it all today. This is truely an incredible story. Your writing is completely magnificent and I really hope you become a writer, I will definitely be buying your books! The love story, the tragadies, the friendships and family themes you had running through it were just ahh! I couldn't stop reading. I lost it with the shoes as well, it was the perfect thing to happen!
I just wanted to say that your an incredible writer and to keep going! This is one of the most perfect things I have ever read, look forward to more (:
bellachica01 chapter 32 . 3/1/2013
Such a beautiful story. I like how each tragedy a personal impact on Bella. Great job
april09-TW chapter 32 . 2/23/2013
I finished reading your story earlier this week but haven't had a chance to review. I loved all the imagery throughout and can imagine the barn exactly. I have no idea why I never read it earlier when it was a WIP as everyone was raving about it, but I kind of like that I got to read it all at once.
(I looked you up after reading your wonderful Ho Hey contest entry.)
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful story with us. There were so many things I loved-their connection, the nuances, the lovely repetition of things throughout, Esme's letters. I also remember the SF earthquake-I remember being horrified at the video clips they showed on tv of cars suddenly falling into the sky from the bridge.
Adhis chapter 32 . 2/14/2013
This was such a beautiful story. I loved it so much.
brooklyngirlx chapter 32 . 2/11/2013
Holy shit, I've seen this story around and knew it was a bit heavy so I avoided it for a while until I had more time. And boy was I missing something. I've read hundreds of stories here, and this definitely is in the top ten. So good, from beginning to end. I love it.
gabyR chapter 32 . 1/26/2013
Loved every minute of this story. I laughed, smiled, even hurt along with some characters. I guess that's what makes a story great!
Holscad chapter 32 . 1/16/2013
So beautiful...
Holscad chapter 31 . 1/16/2013
I COMPLETELY lost it with the shoes...I knew it was coming...but I lost it anyway...this ended beautifully...iLOVED it!

And then I read your A/N and started crying again...I love how you write...you have a beautiful soul...
Holscad chapter 30 . 1/16/2013
"I'd still be that loser girl with closet of shoes...I'd be my mother " OMG I cant stop crying...this whole chapter...Gawd...and her name...Hope...I need to breathe...
Holscad chapter 29 . 1/16/2013
I had feeling they would go...how wonderful...and I love that he asked Rose to look after her...this is all so good...
Holscad chapter 28 . 1/16/2013
Wow...
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