Reviews for ϕ
Guest chapter 2 . 3/8/2015
This was horrible. Characterization is all wrong. All the dialogue you wrote does not fit with their characters and personalities in game and in the game's notes. Its also really sexist and stereotypical.
MEleeSmasher chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
Well, An English fan fiction of a game that sucked, but the story was interesting to say the least. I would like to see more.
chaostheory1989 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I hated Coles death. She was my favourite characther to play as, and to see her and Jones (who I rarely played as so I wasn't as bothered with his death) It sucked that, one minute Cole was looking for weaknesses then, boom.

It's just as bad as the death of Kat B320.