Reviews for Sunshine
alicefan32 chapter 16 . 8/26/2011
great story
alicefan32 chapter 15 . 8/26/2011
great chapter
Kemq chapter 16 . 8/26/2011
Great story.
yunadustrial.twifan chapter 16 . 8/26/2011
this was really good. i liked how you ended it.
Jasper's-Darlin chapter 16 . 8/25/2011
Great story! You are really coming in to your writing. And I really liked this story. I understand now how Jasper got captured. And thank you for explaining. I really hope you write more girl/guy stories! Thank you.
Jacoby's slave chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Well I'm liking the story so far, and just so you know had you not told us english wasn't ut first language I wouldn't have guessed!
Enflura Amberflower chapter 16 . 8/25/2011
all i have to say is "WOW"
yearprincess chapter 16 . 8/25/2011
This was such a good story. And you can barely tell that English isn't your first language. I'd just like to take the moment to say well done. Good job.
traceybuie chapter 16 . 8/25/2011
Well congratulations on finishing your story. :)
traceybuie chapter 15 . 8/25/2011
I'm glad that they finally said, "I love you." I hate that there are still so many questions though.
acw1 chapter 16 . 8/25/2011
:)
TwilightAddict71484 chapter 16 . 8/25/2011
sad that it's over but now you can start on a new one.
Lazielow chapter 14 . 8/18/2011
Looking forward to seeing another update soon. XP
cathy29jes chapter 14 . 8/16/2011
hello,

it was a trap Volturi to see if Bella had a gift ,but if Aro thinks Bella will serve in his guard he is wrong ,it will never go with them,Jane and Victoria will do may be not punished if they followed the orders of Aro ,but it will not keep Bella in her anyway , excellent chapter,

cathy
alicefan32 chapter 14 . 8/16/2011
great chapter
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