Reviews for Sunshine
Robin.D chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
oh wow Alice did it :o/ good chapter :o) :o)
MildredDempsey chapter 16 . 9/8/2012
Great story!
Guest chapter 16 . 8/23/2012
i didnt like it - i LOVED it ;))) and even if Im not an native english-speaker too, i thought your way of writing was really i mean REALLY good! you definitivly deserve more reviews ;) GO GIRL YOURE AMAZING!
Guest chapter 16 . 6/28/2012
oh my this was a great story sad but good so they fell off of there diets did they but they can go back onto it right that is a good thing so they lit four candles then but life carries on with or without people in there lives
Guest chapter 15 . 6/28/2012
ah finally they admitted there love for each other after all of the war and stuff and finding out that the Volturri was involved was just dumb in my eyes just to reveal Bella talent that isn't right in my eyes nope and so Felix just used there friendship then right so now Bella won't be able to trust the Volturri at all no matter what
Guest chapter 14 . 6/28/2012
wow this was a good battle and i am glad that Bella found Jasper in one piece and he was glad to see her but it sounded like that it was planned to kill Bella from the Volturri because Jane was standing there with Victoria now that is something to hear if they planned it together
Guest chapter 13 . 6/28/2012
so she did call Volturri well Felix and i wonder if he would help her i hope so after all they kept her for over two years in a cell with no lights what so ever and in the dark and being tortured and i also hope that Jasper is still alive
Guest chapter 12 . 6/28/2012
oh my two months not hearing from Jasper is a long time to be without hearing from him i wonder why Bella just gave up from living she had him as a friend now he doesn't phone or anything to let them know that he is okay i wonder why Bella is so depressed and worried i would be too if the person didn't keep in contact unless he got caught
Guest chapter 11 . 6/28/2012
who knows Bella i think you guys are doing the right thing though going slow in your relationship building it up and not rushing into it you both were hurt so severe you need time to heal with each other and learn about each other so yea you are doing the right thing going slow
Guest chapter 10 . 6/28/2012
wow Jasper should of said something same with Carlisle and Bella they should of sat down and spoke about it and got it all out in the open instead of holding onto it for a long time
Guest chapter 9 . 6/28/2012
oh no this chapter was a good one don't worry about it you did very well on the lemon part of the story they did comfort each other and like Bella said she didn't want to loose him and that is understandable since they have been getting close to each other of there travels so yea i can understand Bella where she is coming from
Guest chapter 8 . 6/28/2012
of course Esme would be the one to greet them right away before they even had the chance to get out of the car i'm surprised that she waited for them to get out of the car wow different that and they get her back and she went to look for Jasper and has been away since well i guess they have to catch up and what has been happening
Guest chapter 7 . 6/28/2012
oh wow so if Jasper saw Victoria on there way to where ever they are now that is not good news that means she has been following them around i hope not they both need a little piece don't you think they both went through a lot already
Guest chapter 6 . 6/28/2012
wow they are both lost a lot and they need to try to pull together in their lives to come through this darkness that they are in hopefully they can carry on.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/28/2012
wow i think they are starting to feel things for each other i think friendship or even more and they don't know about it yep
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