Reviews for The Second Parallel
Supergirl948 chapter 11 . 7/1/2016
So did Kevin die I can't help but to wonder
Pigeon Overlord chapter 10 . 10/15/2011
:'( Poor, poor, Ryan! Now he's in Heaven with the angels, Captain Montgomery, and all the other 24 characters! I hope my Javier doesn't fall into alcoholism *cough* *cough* I WISH WE HAD FOOD NOW!

Well, au revoir for now!

~Pinkie Pie
castlebeckett siempre chapter 9 . 9/4/2011
excellent

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castlebeckett siempre chapter 8 . 8/6/2011
excellent

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I like
Pigeon Overlord chapter 7 . 7/12/2011
Sorry it took me so long to review :$ I like this! Poor Ryan... Respo shall pwn forever! Good job, my friend :)
DeadPigeon chapter 5 . 7/11/2011
Sorry, made it to five, but your story is too clinical(it's like reading a textbook) and it lacks emotion.
castlebeckett siempre chapter 7 . 7/11/2011
:o

EXCELLENT

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castlebeckett siempre chapter 6 . 7/10/2011
AWESOME

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castlebeckett siempre chapter 5 . 7/8/2011
excellent

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Schatze8210 chapter 4 . 7/7/2011
Intriguing story...much more ASAP, please