Reviews for Make Me Sweat
shehazi chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
Love Emmett :-)
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
this was a very good one shot. Wow Emmett got caught stroking himself. Like Jasper told him just ask Bella to go out with him right.
happyghost chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
I really enjoyed this! You write Emmett really well, and if you ever add to this I want some Jasper Whitlock hot yoga positions worked into the story. Okay?

Thanks!

:)
X.summergrey.X chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
I would love to see a sequel to this. loved it
babygirl2928259 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
love it
Avari20 chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
That was great! Loved it.
fantasylover4evr chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
I love it :D
Rainbowbrite006 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Awesome story. :o)
jessa76 chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
please we need more bella's pov and them hookin up please please for all us big girls
gjficfan chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
Loved this and am still cracking up as I type. "chubby delights" and "four feet of hatred" were my fave lines LOL. Lucky Bella is all I have to say ;0)
hnwhitlock2000 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
WOOHOO! Add some more!
GothicTemptress chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
I was going to log off but then saw this and had to read it right away. I loved this too! I wish you would expand on this, actually, to give your readers a taste of her thoughts as well, and maybe even some smokin' hot sexin'. Maybe? Please? Alerting just in case.
Agrutle chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Awesome story! I love full figured Bellas!
ForSheerFun chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
I loved it...hope you continue the story...
RachelxMichelle chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Hah. Bella's response was too funny. I would love to see a second part added to this some time in the future, but I know how busy you are. Anyways this was pretty hot and I loved it.
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