Reviews for My Hostage, Not Yours 3: The Inevitable Takeover
Downbelow chapter 6 . 9/9
Guest chapter 32 . 1/1
It may not be traditionaly romantic but it definatly feels right
AmberJF chapter 39 . 9/26/2015
You have an incredible story here. I love the pairings though I wish Tin and Tine?, wish they had a bigger role to play as well as the three children at the castle. Otherwise I was shocked. I came as an obsessing Zagr fan, now i leave off an obsessing Datr fan. Seriously, right after i got my fill of squeeness for their growing relationship, as they settled into their "happily ever after" a new romance was blossoming and rebuilding my squee of joy factor. You iz pure genius. I also happily respect that the M rating didn't follow Dib and Tak. But left their relationship to still grow. I also adored the scene where Tak said "I love you too." Not esspecially romantic but cute and the sympathy she showed made me smile. I wasn't excpecting it.

PS: Ha! No cliffhangers for me! XD
PSS: THANK YOU! For making the story, keeping the characters true to themselves (esspecially Tak, my new fav), building each romance SLOWLY and not drowning in hormones or romance, and a serious thank you for Completing the story! (As not everyone does that)
AmberJF chapter 25 . 9/22/2015
I like those three. I think they have potential to add to the story. I look forward to seeing what you decided to do with them. Also, you have a folder of deleted scenes? Wonder if you still do. That would be neat to add another chapter of the deleted scenes long after this was finished. Hehe
AmberJF chapter 21 . 9/21/2015
You are an amazing writer and this was by far the cutest sweetest chapter of the series. Probably in all the IZ stories I've read. I love that Zim waits for marriage and the relationship the two have. I also adore the building DaTr. This series has been nothing but pure epic awesomeness. Your characters point of views, the funny parts, and the fact you got 90% of your readers more excited for Tak's appearance than inappropriate material. That alone should make people practically worship your creative writing skills. I also really love that you've answered peoples comments via story, told people your plans for the story that changed (big plus for that) and added little things from your daily life. It really makes you more down-to-earth and less likely for people to whine about the story, and makes you all the more lovable in general.

And be proud. I hate M rated stories. Any story I've dipped into with that rating usually just gets me sick. Bleck. Thank you for having all the funny, arguey, and fluffiness that built up their love first. Marrriage too! YAY! But not only have you gotten me to read, love and fav this story. But also review its amazingness. Excellent Job. *Claps*
Sabortoothtiger1 chapter 10 . 6/17/2015
OK I know this is already finished but I just wanted to say this story is amazing and since I am a weirdo I have to say your story is the kinda relationship I want me and my if I ever get one bf to have since I believe I can never find love and others have told me. I was surprised to see ha was a ZATR shipper its cool but I am a ZAGR shipper and did u know the created of the show is a ZAGR shipper thought I tell u that
blackbutlerfan98 chapter 22 . 6/4/2015
Oh sweet merciful god this was an adorable chapter. I mean, sex isnt meant to be adorable but this was just too endearing, I loved it. Wonderful work from a virgin ;) (I DON'T MEAN FOR THAT TO SEEM CREEPY, IT'S JUST THAT MY FRIEND HAS ME WRITE SEX SCENES FOR HER BECAUSE SHE'S NEVER DONE ANY OF THAT, BLESS HER HEART BUT SHE CAN'T WRITE SMUT FOR SHIT. Angst though, she's good with angst and feels) Anyways, I love this story so much, I hope it ends well.
Rain Shigu chapter 17 . 5/2/2015
Well that was anticlimactic... I had my theory about the maid about two or three chapters after she showed up.
Someone chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
Omg. Where's MHNY4? It's been 2 years since you promised the story to be published! Are you dead? Or hospitalized? Omg... Please don't be dead! YOU HAVE SO MUCH TO LIVE FOR!

By the way, your stories are the only fanfictions that I read more than 10 times. I'm a hardcore fan. Of both invader zim and your stories.

I really hope you are okay, and please if you see this message, and that you are alright, write mhny4, cos that's the only way.
TheAmazingJoker chapter 17 . 11/16/2014
I had no intention on commenting on this story, or, at least, not until the last chapter. I just wanted to say that if I had read this earlier, I COULD HAVE FOILED YOUR EVIL SUSPENSE TACTICS WITH TAK! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT MUAHAHAHA.
Sorry about that. Its just that... W
Tmntgirl4eva chapter 39 . 6/14/2014
Best invader zim story evaaaaa! Good job i rlly enjoyed it
LaceyRide chapter 13 . 1/24/2014
"well, you'll get nothing, but your loyalty will be noted."
Normally I don't review finished stories, but this time I had to. That phrase is perfect. I laughed like an insane person.
Love it.
HeroesNHope57 chapter 39 . 1/21/2014
I know that gaz can not get pregnant but zim has irkens technology , he can mix his and gaz DNA to clone a daughter or son that has both irken and human features and maybe he will do a favour for tak and dib too. If u ever make a story about the new world ruled by zim and gaz and maybe the story can be about their cloned daughter or son and tak and dibs son or daughter adventures . If u ever make this type of story ... I will scream and be happy for so long! Your work is amazing and you are so humble ! U R THE BEST ZAGR WRITER EVA! Thank u for reading this message of DOOM! Lol
Punisher143 chapter 25 . 8/21/2013
Can I just say, as a retrospective of the series so far, I find it very amusing that it's like the Metal Gear universe. They have all this awesome weaponry, space armadas and the like, but they don't use them in favor of just using swords.

It slaps me on the knee.
lolalulabell chapter 28 . 5/8/2013
I've had a very rough day, and I am very lad I had this to look forward to. Thank you Echo!
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