|Reviews for Taking Action|
| classified chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
No you stopped at a good part! XD
I like it but it needs something leading up to the yummy yurilicious parts. Lol.
| Tomahawk 3.0 chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
a really good story
| HayabusaOkami chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Only seen two episodes so far and this was honestly the first pairing i thought of. Normal straight couples do not exist in my mind... -.-
| Lolita Chick Love chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Love it~Makes me soooooo wet!
But there's only one thing-isn't Mikuru supposed to be older than Haruhi?
| Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Well, well, soldier...
And you say this is your FIRST attempt at yuri? O_o Seriously? This was TOO good for a "1º try"! LOL
S-W-EET, funny, wonderfully smexy and fluffy! Just LOEVly! *A*
Very N-I-CE work, marine!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
| Drake Nolsa chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Finally! The number of yuri writers rose! I was getting really ahhoyed how I've been almost the only one here.
Well, it's short but, it was good. There's nothing I really need to say but good job. I liked how Haruhi was just teaching Mikuru something as well as letting her take charge for a change. Overall, I liked it.
| Jafar chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Hi, Ive actually never read haruhi fanfiction before and am certainly not that into yuri but ive ead all your other stuff and i know youre really good and this was no exception
I loved the descriptions and Mikuru 'taking action' was so simple yet profound. excellent keep writing fic XXX
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I really liked this, it was short but you said it would be i the summary and i thought it was really cool how through describing sex you were able to get though a theme of liberation. awsome and your descriptions were really good *thumbs up*