Reviews for Naruto and Pokemon: Power of Partnership
thor94 chapter 19 . 5/15
interesting story.
but i think you seriously fucked up with naruto affinities.
and you tell, that you don't like power up etc, but it is exactly you done with sasuke, see:
-fuckin rich with ton of money
-katon jutsu
-spam ice with elemental inversion
-dragon type: can use dragon move and related main element like lightning, water, fire and maybe wind.
-charmander quickly evolve.

-poor orphan, konoha and sarutobi denied his legacy and basically stolen all of his assets (money, clan jutsu, etc.
-has kirlia, but currently she is almost weak compared to other paired pokemon.
-fly type: almost useless, the worst type to obtain for human. sasuke can learn dragon move. tell me a flying move not related to futon naruto can learn? i bet your mind is blank. because most of flying type move (including ALL strong and useful ones) need flying ability, having wing or thousands feather. something impossible for humans (you explained that yourself when you revealed team 7 types). I hope later (i means after 3y training at worse) you give naruto dragon type or awake bloodline like multitypes (naruto can use all type existing).
-his bloodline is almost useless, excepted if you plan naruto master it to create workable appendages (means naruto could transform into pokemon and use all of there move, if naruto turn into charizard, he can fly and spat fire, etc)
Dreaming of the Phoenix chapter 1 . 1/24
As a general rule I avoid anything less than 'M-rated' because, on the whole they tend to be rather uninspired and boring. But every now and then, I manage to find that one nugget, that may be gold, or fools gold. Now I have to see just which of the two yours is.
pikachucat chapter 19 . 11/23/2014
awesome more please
thunder dragon chapter 19 . 11/13/2014
please update soon this story is awesome, well wrote and please school neji in them chunin exams please.
Saric23 chapter 19 . 8/31/2014
This is by far the best NarutoxPokemon story I've come across. I just re-read it, and I'm really hoping that this is just a really long update break and you plan on keeping it going.
HitomiFeito chapter 19 . 8/11/2014
I'm excited for the next chapter, this is really different from the other stories xxxx
King ofheros chapter 3 . 8/1/2014
abra...the bane of my existence
I think abra is what made me hate roaming pokemon

only get one turn to capture?

good luck
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 17 . 7/17/2014
ahh akward Hiashi always fun... poor guy. and future messes with NINJA in the mix who have probably worked and worked HARD to protect themselves from the attempts at omnipotence? hell these are the people who consistently bring biju down low, even with lots of piles of dead bodies so there is that, and cut yourself off means your not connected to be TOLD certain things which CAN be messy as well... hmm.
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 14 . 7/17/2014
so... I like everything... save for the eight gate is turning to pokemon bullshit nonsense. really consideirng the hollier than thou attitudes, and considering that if the risk of death If not humanity means that ninjas who are more sacrificial arnt going to LOOK at the gates, consider them powerful but far to god dam costly and then become EXPERMENTAl.. their is litteraly less risk, you cant cripple yourself anymore and at thevery end of it all after being able to go nucking... you get to keep fighting as a pokemon or go join the spirits as some supped up power... it just... really cheapens everything with it. this no killing unless absolutely necessary, but pokemon are pretty much exclusive of the dotn let them kill variety and...
Ive loved what you've done w th this but where are the more naruto sides of this with awesomeness and WOUNDS like lapras or something?

hmm. want to reiterate that I like this you do charecters and motivatiosn and thinking so dam WELL but... meh I dunno some stuff is worrying me a bit on implications.
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 11 . 7/17/2014
heh Kurama just had a akward hate/love child with Naruto. the funny , wonders can never cease!
seriously though I LOVE how you handled Orochimaru, Sasuke and Kurama at this point of the fight...

hell especially that bit with Kurama ad the disavowing the child so it isn't destroyed by naruto angle that could show up later...
and I agree with your look on Kabuto hes FASENATING and as far as villians go in people that could litteraly give the leaf one giant fuck off Kabuto is one of the BEST, Orchimaru earning his loyalty through ACTUALLY earning his loyalty bit, as well as the whole you were emotionally shatted mess...
I mean god DAMM IT Danzo, loyalty has to be EARNED to make them WANT to be loyal and weapons need MAINTENCE and your body canb e a weapon UNDER your disposale and if regular weapons need maintence wouldent humans aslo need emotional stability and...
dam it Danzo.

the full story of adopted fater of medic on and Danzo not realizing that the kid is that Kabuto that I tried to murder has GOT to be... a mess.
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 8 . 7/16/2014
dam nice, although I grieve for the loss moments of opportunity that Sasuke COULD have had in regards to Haku, while Haku and Naruto is such anostalgic memory the Fun to be had with Sasuke and Haku interaction could have been... well.

im a tad sad for suigetsu as a former apprentice of Zabuzas who got captured and tourtured/experimented on because that just sucks for him. and Zabuza not getting to kill all the mercenaries either I sad to. still despite that... this was fun.
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 4 . 7/16/2014
ok you just handled EVERYONE so freaking well... and sheesh Huntur, meaning gengar latter if tobi ever shows up... yikes that is going to be painfull, I LOVE how you handled the team test here int aht all of them are KIDS you SHOWED how utterly desperate and sqrewed up Sasuke is in regards to desperation... but how team seven was being just a regular team but STILL themselves at this age was also a great thing. the intervention is just wonderful and you treating ichia icha with RESPECT was also great, I love it when people make it a colorful story mixed with the sexiness and you making it a THING is funny. and alas pre teens, what fun right?

so this explains he old, pokemon who out live their masters bit which is.. yeah. Absol is an incredibly well fit with Kakshis nature as well ,and I DID love the bit about the hero worship a bit in regards to bluntly claiming him as the strongest there was, considering he WAS a legend, and a young one at that... still what fun to be had!
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 3 . 7/16/2014
I like all of your chocies A lot really especially with how you are leaving things up for POTENTIAL, and dam it that bit about Sasuke and sakura and you still respecting them that is just AWESOME. and hell given everyone's respective styles and fighting potential... and the wayt hat as ninja with the pokemon they could BUILD on that (I know that metagross can flot at least a little if I remember correctly, and Shikmaru up in the clouds with some LONG shadows to be so very messy with... muha.
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 2 . 7/16/2014
ehh I like that you did some different things with the council, but im sad that you didn't make more DIVISON in the civillan part of the council, I hope you show some of the truly indespensible bits that the council DOES that would make them a part of the ruling part of the leaf but... yeah. I cant wait to see what that happens. I do like that tis an ALLIENCE witht he humans not we gods you not bit... the legendaries having ISSUES with the bijju is interesting as well and hell im sort of curious about how this has changed things and dear GOD do I wish to see some oft he S clas'es pokemon... and oh Itachi and THAT mess and Danzo with his I admit I have fucked up in my time which is GREAT character growth for Danzo and I like that bit... anyway. fun to be had everywhere. cant wait tos ee where this goes.
Sage of wind Dragons chapter 1 . 7/16/2014
ok you seem to have started out LOVELY in the sense of what exact ways you want to go about this, what with everything and hell you handled MIZUKI in a different and entirely fun way. I do have questions though, essentially aobut pokemon who DONT die with their partner in battle what happens to them?
are the pokemont hat are with their partners able to reproduce with other pokemon that they would usually be able to?

just some thoughts if you ever want to do some ways for people to have more than one pokemon and NOT be a villain.

on the whole im sort of loving everything in regards to how your handiling this, especially with the legendaries it adds so much more POWER and options to the world, what legendaries have become allies to what villages? and with everyone being a double fighter now because they ALWAYS have allies... .add all the summon clans, the biju and all others, I am VERYc uriosua bout the world that this could be in the more.. .alive sense. that bit aobut sealing charkas was also wonderfully wonderfull, but because tis so mass produced and like tha ti ownder if those peoples might go out of the village and maby some descendants make it so bandits and the like that are able to fight ninjas at least a little in ways that make it so that they arnt being slaughtered by the lowest ninja a 100 at a time?/or... anyway, this has such interesting POTENTIAL, and you have captured my interest. well done.
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