|Reviews for Gone A Hunting|
| Ashes From Ashes chapter 2 . 1/1/2012
Hm, interesting. When do we get to see what she looks like? She's an interesting character, I think I'll keep an eye on this. It has potential for awesomeness. A few little mistakes (typos, really) here and there, I don't think there were more than one or two. A couple sentences were a little awkward (such as "Hello there pretty little lady, you look like you're looking for something, right?")
But it's good. Believable, interesting plot. Looks like you have the making of an interesting story here.