Reviews for Dissention
Cain Elphinstone chapter 5 . 10/6/2011
Wow I really like this story! Though I'm pretty sure Tidus would know what avideo game and what a fridge is (he is from the all teched up Zanarkand), but otherwise, the characters seem in character. Only piece of advice I have is proof read, there are a couple typos here and there. I will be waithing for the next chapter!
KefuTina chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
GOD! This is freakin beautifull! Why hasn't it any reviews, yet? This touched me in a way no other story in this category has. It's melancholic and sweet and poetic and feels like something thought lost from a world long forgotten that has been found again. I don't know if that description describes my sentiment good enough but it's a beautiful feeling.

So, I'm in awe, whatever you're using for inspiration and/or motivation, it's working and you're definetly going in the right direction.