Reviews for Body Language
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
HeavenlySwirl chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Wahaha. Lovely! :D
Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
LOL! XD All the biology stuff was interesting. Loved it!

Keep writing!

Katsumi Ashia chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Though I think these phrases would fit Sakura more, I loved your BIO lingo! Hahaha, it was really creative and original!

Good job!

Bishie Huntress chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Cute! I loved the biologically correct confessions. XD It would be fun to see a following confrontation between the two. It's not like they could hide from each other forever!

Keep writing!
NCISMcAbbyISthebest chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Ha funny! Loved the biology. :)
MissFaerieKaiti chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
lolz Aww, this is just so cute~! xD
Ariasujm-chan chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Que lindo! Ame tu fic, sorry que te escriba en español, pero no tengo cabeza aún para tratar de escribirte en inglés lo genial de tu fic... Simplemente lo ame!1 3
FlockFighter101 chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
haha, hat was great. :3

you should make a few more chapters for this.
pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Hahah, cute and quirky. I like it! Especially the way you portrayed their interaction and characterization. Nice job. :)
Lairelosse chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
I enjoyed this story, even though I am not a fan of Naruto. I liked how you managed to connect it all to what we learn in school during Biology lessons! I won't tell your teacher what you have been doing during Biology. Or will I? Haha. Just kidding.

Anyway, I only have a few things to comment on. "After all, she doubted that he would have a good reaction if she were to tell him how she felt." I think that this sentence would sound better if you said "she doubted that he would react well/positively" instead.

I loved this sentence: "It wasn't as though she could sashay up to him, prod him in the chest in an attempt to get him to listen to her and suddenly blurt out her innermost thoughts." It is very YOU, if you know what I mean.

And on a biological note, I don't think bones relax and contract. The muscles surrounding the bones certainly do, but the bones themselves? We'll have to look that up in our Biology textbooks. And I think blood vessels undergo vasodilation, not the entire body. My Biology is not my strongest point, though, so don't take my word for it! :D

I liked the ending and also the part where Tenten said "Oh my shuriken!" Overall, I enjoyed the story as I always do your stories. I hereby command you to write at least two stories per week! HAHAHA.
hihimakino chapter 1 . 6/28/2011

I just loved it! Amazing ;D

Loved all the Biology part XD

I also made a "biological" fanfic, but it didnt come so funny like yours XD
superduperizee chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
I like it! My biology teacher in highschool never told those kind of things, how sad... Good job! Fluff till the end! Thank you for this. Ü
Love Is Only a Word chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
That was soooo kawaii
smonkey chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
I thought it was hilarious using those phrases and then translating them to actual English. That's the part that really set this story apart from other stories like this. It was interesting and very funny.

Keep writing! :D
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