Reviews for Cracks
BreadNotDead chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
I believe I read this fic some years ago, but completely forgot to favorite it when I finally made an account! MCxFeMC has been my favorite pair for some reason, so I'm really glad you made this beautiful fic!
GameAndAnimeFreak chapter 1 . 9/25/2016
Ah.. I don't know what to say.. Just, this is really beautiful. Especially the last one was so sad and beautiful, and that I listened to Memories of the School while reading it makes it even better :')
Great story. Hope one day you'll make more!
MinakoxMinato chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
LoliMochi chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
This was beautifully written. Both their thoughts (though mainly his as it was in his POV) was heart warming, even if they were only just one sentence (the ones in italics I mean). I think you stuck to Minato's general personality quite well. I say general because it's really actually the player that makes up his personality in the game, but he is usually described as quiet and distant.

The way you've written their contrasts have been done wonderfully and in the end, they are meant to be together as one.

I found this heart warming and bitter sweet. Their last thoughts were a perfect way to end this one-shot ("I'm leaving." / "Not without me."). I loved this a lot because it's style and the way it's written was really beautiful and it does make my eyes watery.

Great job. I really like the Minato and Minako pairing now. If I can find more that are as great as your's, I'll be a happy reader.
Yuki Minamoto chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Fu- I cried.

Oh god, I cried.

This is one of the most heartwarming/heartbroken fanfictions about them in here!

Polar opposites, and yet they both attract each other.

GGAAAH! WHY?! Minato's unspoken love to Minako's cheerful happiness, it's so sad.

I love this fanfiction to pieces.

Tyrant Yoshitsuna chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Even in death

... They shall not Part ...
randomperson chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
this is wonderful! I'm crying in here dude!

love MinatoxMinako pairing! (Not as siblings though)

and let me repeat, this fic is awesome!
fhclause chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
This is really touching! I love it!
chimichi chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
AHH! I love this! Minakoxminato I love them sooo much! Damn but there's only a little fic about this pairing :( but thanks for making this story! I really love them :D
TsubasaWitch chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Oh god that was just...touching TTwTT I've finished this game a few times myself and it just gets to me. Every single time this game teaches you how to not take life for granted. You wrote this very well I'm going to go and read some of your other persona fics now as well.

Mimi Minato chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Aww so beautifull! Almost made me cry :'
Goojila chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Beautiful. Simple beautiful is all I have to say. I loved how you portray Minako and Minato and how you'd always end each part with Minato comforting Minako. Their interaction is wonderfully woven and every moment was touching.

Your writing style is clean, smooth, and overall wonderful. I really enjoy reading every one-shot from you, and I anticipate another brilliant one-shot or story in the near future.


P.S. Do you give out writing lessons? XD
kapal kertas chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Simply amazing, especially the part when they pestering Minako and the last two lines.

I really love the way you portrayed their relationship and I am very glad if you make more oneshots about them in the future.

Thank you so much for the fic! :)
Capae Batty chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Just going to simply say that reading this was a highlight of my night.

Keep up the work 3


(Need's to be more MinaxMina pairing stories, that are cute like this one)