|Reviews for CheckMate|
| yougotrejected chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
i like them
| April chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Name: Alexandria (Alex) Kiss
Hometown: New York City
Appearance: Alex is half latina so she has dark brown (almost black) hair she blunt straight bangs that often fall in her eyes, big brown eyes and tan hispanic skin. Alex is also very curvy but still thin.
Extracurricular(s): Flute lessons, soccer
Fave Subject: band
Snotty Scale (1-11): 1
Alpha Features: Her looks, her quiet personality
Alpha Track: Flute
Alpha Majors: Flute, acting, soccer
Alpha Minors: dancing, singing
Personality: Alex is a total music freak and always will be, but she's still fun loving and a total sweetheart.
Alpha Motto: music is life! (she writes it everywhere)
Interests: playing flute, being with friends, soccer
Fave Color: blue
Can't Leave The House Without: her flute!
Outfit: skinny jeans, a white t-shirt, black vest, black fingerless gloves, black fedora, black boots
Steryotype: The Music Geek
Dorm: Same as Roxie
Boyfriend: none, but Melbourne makes her swoon...
Other Info: she is roxie and effies cousin
| yuogotrejected again chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Hometown:same as Noah
Appearance:sckarlet hair that goes to her knees green eyes
Average:2.8 (She has Noah tutor her but she is still bad)
Fave Subject:does lunch count
Snotty Scale (1-11):11
Alpha Features:she can be nice but a wee bit mean.
Personality:she is just like Tabitha
Alpha Motto:i'm beast
Interests: boys! shopping and making fun of people
Fave Color: Rose pink
Can' Leave The House Without: make up bag
Outfit:a pink tank top that is cut off at the belly button and black skinny jeans with pink converses.
Steryotype:the popurler girl
Dorm:same as Tabitha
Other Info:belive it or not she is Noah's twin.
| Random Smirking Blonde chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Hey i am April's twin sister, but you probably know that. i will submit Roxie's twin sister, okay?
Name: Evangeline (Effie) Heart
Appearance: Effie looks exactly like Roxie but her hair is streaked with neon colors, which makes her look way more punk than Roxie and disguises her beauty, but it's there.
Extracurricular(s): Karate and violin lessons, but most of her after school is spent in detention.
Fave Subject: Science (She gets to explode things, duh)
Snotty Scale (1-11): 11000000000000000
Alpha Features: Her attitude, her fearlessness and her recklessness, her looks, her intimidating personality that gets her everything she wants.
Alpha Track: Violin (musicianship)
Alpha Majors: Singing, acting, songwriting
Alpha Minors: Dancing, drawing
Personality: Effie is the baddest girl you'll ever meet. You can walk in a room and she'll already know exactly what she thinks of you. Effie knows every way to get under your skin and isn't afraid to use violence, cuz for her, violence is not only the answer, it's fun. Effie is very outgoing and isn't afraid to shove you to the ground if you get in her way. No one stops Effie from doing what she wants, and can somehow always convince authority that she's an angel.
“I think I can deceive people. I'm like, the nice, sweet girl when you meet me. And I don't have any bad intentions. But I'm a bad girl too." -Alicia Silverstone
Interests: Boys, breaking rules and a good party
Fave Color: Black
Can' Leave The House Without: Eyeliner and lots of it.
Outfit: Black skinny jeans with rips, a flowy white shirt, black vest, black fedora and knee high black suede boots.
Steryotype: The Badder than Erikka Bad Girl
Dorm: Same as Roxie's
Boyfriend: None yet, but is crushing on Taz and trying to get Roxie out of the picture, even though she knows Taz has fallen hard to Roxie and Roxie'll end up with him most likely.
Other Info: Even though she and Roxie are so different, they're best friends. She, Roxie and Erikka rule this school, obvious-ley.
| Yougotburned chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Name: Tabitha Brickham
Hometown: Provedince, Rhode Island
Appearance:a little past the shoulders wavy black hair, bangs cover her left eye (died hot pink), dark brown eyes, fairly tanned, short
Extracurricular: Acting, Dancing
Fav subject: Drama
Snotty Scale: 9
Alpha features: Sarcastic, kind of mean, controling
Alpha track: Preforming arts
Majors: Acting, sining, dancing
minors: everything else
Personality: Sarcastic, Controling, steps on people to get what she wants, mean
Motto: "I'm awesome, get over it'
Interests: Facebook, shopping, music, anything girly
Fav. Color: Hot pink
Dorm: Which ever
Boyfriend: She's too busy to get one
Sterytype: airhead dancer (which she fits)
Outfit: Hot pink, V neck shirt that says 'when I get where I'm going' on the front and 'you won't be there' on the back. black skinny jeans, hot pink cowgirl boots. A single heart shapped necklace.
| 7kissestillmidnight chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
great! I'll apply.
NAME: Bridgette Kathleen Victoria Elizabeth Valdingham-Matthews.
AGE: 13 and 1/2.
HOMETOWN: Westchester, New York.
APPEARANCE: 5'6 tall. Thin. B-Cups. Soft and thick blond-brown hair that reaches my shoulders. Brown eyes with thick brown lashes.
EXTRACURRICULARS: Student Body President. Debate Team. Editor-in-chief, WA (Westchester Academy) Daily. (school paper) Spelling Squad. Westchester Academy Lady Acers. (tennis team)
FAVE SUBJECT: All. Duh, see my average? But I really do love Languages most of all. The more languages I know the more people can hear about the latest gossip, which only I know about! notizie? balita? klatsch? nouvelles? noticias?
SNOTTY SCALE: 1. I am the Student Body President, which means I have to be a role model and be the friendliest person on the whole school. But if you mess with me or my friends, you'll see much more than 11.
ALPHA FEATURES: If I list all of my features here, it would fill up 10 review pages.
ALPHA TRACK: Public Speaking, Politics a& Tennis.
ALPHA MAJORS: Writing. Speaking. Leading. Making People Believe in me.
Alpha Minors: None that I could see. God made me perfect. Unless you consider my inability in contain LBR's secrets a minor.
Personality: Funny, Fun, and Loyal to my BFFs. I keep their secrets, but not the LBR's. I am perfect with the elderly and the parentals. And also every other adult in the planet. I'm great! except for the fact that my mouth is TOO. BIG. FOR. MY. OWN. GOOD. I am not fake. It's just that with secrets, a whole other side of me comes out. It's like I'll die if I keep 'em. Half-British with a wonderful accent and I can imitate American accents, which comes in handy if I whisper-share my secrets. That way, no one knows it's really me.
Alpha Motto: Mottos are hopelessly cliche. I live by one phrase only. It's "I AM THE BEST".
Interests: Gossip. Knowledge. Science. Math. Books. Hot boys with chestnut-brown hair. Gossip. Finding new friends. Parties (non-alcoholic, of course). Gossip. Sleepovers.
Fave Color: Midnight Blue & Chestnut Brown.
Can't leave home without: My VM gold bangle. It stands for Valdingham-Matthews. My father is the richest lawyer in the country. With this bangle, we're almost considered as royalty Because we are. I also need my phone, gossip notebook and my Louis Vuitton monogrammed carry-on containing all my stuff.
Outfit: Wool knee-length skirt, white shirt (tucked-in), white socks and gray Mary Janes. (the soft kind, not the leather ones) I wear this M-Th so my dad gives me unlimited money to spend. But on other days I wear everything that's new, hot and Vogue.
Stereotype: The "perfect" daughter.
Dorm: Anyone BUT Oprah. She is SO over. Preferably J.K. Rowling.
Boyfriend: None. I'll make sure I'm an alpha first before I fall in love. Because falling can only lead to one thing, GETTING HURT.
Other Info: I have 3 brothers, Darwin, Ryan and Edward. I'm the only one with a long name because I'm the only girl in the family, which means there'll be no repetition of names. My name is super-long because my parents love all those names, so they crammed it into one. NICE. But I'm mostly known as Bridgette Valdigham-Matthews. And the Kathleen is the only American name there because my dad's half-american. (mom is pure British).,
And lastly, I do Yoga, Pilates, Roller-Blading and Biking. And I am currently the Guitar hero champion in our house. Spectacular! :D
| PrincessSailorSaturnStar chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Name: Saki Hayashi
Hometown: Saitama, Japan
Appearance: Long Black Hair w/a gold & red tint to it, Dark brown eyes, petite
Extracurriculars: Dance, Writing, Studying, Martial Arts, Gymnastics, Volleyball, Softball, Basketball,Soccer
Fave Subject: English & Math
Snotty Scale (1-11): 5
Alpha Features: Confidence, Control, Smart, Courage, & Charming
Alpha Track: Sports
Alpha Majors: Singing, Acting, Writer, Dance
Alpha Minors: Drawing, Guitarist, Pianist, Cooking
Personality: Outgoing, Funny, Sarcastic, Friendly, Fierce, Smart
Alpha Motto: Never back down.
Interests: Sports, Cooking, Singing, Acting, Writing, Drawing, Dancing, Guitar, Piano, Studying
Fave Color: Red & Gold
Can't Leave The House Without: Her cell phone, Guitar & Sketchpad/Notepad
Outfit: Red Sailor Fuku
Steryotype: The Fierce Girl
Dorm: Same as Emma
Boyfriend: Sydney has been trying to get my attention...
Other Info: Emma & Saki are like sisters
| iWriteStuff202 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Hey, is it ok if i submit 2? Theyre besties
Name: Stephanie St. James
Age: 13 and a 3/4
Hometown: Vancouver, British Columbia
Appearance: About 5 foot 10, average weight of 100 or so, caramel colored hair with ocean blue streaks that reaches just below her shoulders, lightly tanned skin (but you can tell she was born a pasty white kid), heart-shaped face, blue eyes with little flecks of green in them, kinda big nose, rosy pink pouty lips, and a (VERY) small scar on her forehead from when she ran into a cheap fence (but its covers by her hair, which is done Avril Lavigne style)
Extracurricular(s): choir, drama club, young authors club, art club, shes the drummer in her friends' band if that counts,and volleyball (team captain)
Fave Subject: french! (c'est un çi belle langue!)
Snotty Scale (1-11): 5 or 6, depends on the day
Alpha Features: deternimation, creativity, and knows shes important
Alpha Track: performing arts, in general
Alpha Majors: singing, acting, and writing
Alpha Minors: acting, and cooking (if youre gonna have that in your fic)
Personality: you do NOT wanna get in Stephanie's way. She'll chew you up, spit you up, and crush you with her lucky green Converse. She does however, have a sweet, girly side, that she only shows to her closest friends: Deanna, Stevie (dont be fooled by his name and personality, hes a he), and Vanessa (i only mentioned them because she mentions her friends A LOT) Stephanie has a passion for music that could probably make the whole world music-loving hippies, and lets her star power shine 24/7. She loves humor, rebellion, and freedom, and is considered somewhat a tomboy because she has a killstreak of 379 on Black Ops, and skateboards EVERYWHERE (even on Alpha Island). She is her parent's least favorite kid (she has three siblings: her brothers Jacob and Edward, and her twin sister Sophie), and doesnt really care what people think of her. Except Shira, of course. Stephanie respects all musical tastes, but prefers her rock/punk/alternative/electro/somewhat emo taste.
Alpha Motto: "If I try I can shine brighter than the stars... oh, sorry, am I blinding you?"
Interests: Twitter, her friends, music, Paramore, her cat, Black Veil Brides, Green Day, sports (she was part of the Canuckas riot), video games, FanFiction, Facebook
Fave Color: ocean blue, though she is also a fan of dark violet and light-ish music
Can' Leave The House Without: iPod touch (she's already filled the memory with just songs), iced capp, and breaking something
Outfit: leather jacket with studs, long white graphic tee with the words "Gimme Your Best Shot" on it in typewriter font with a picture of a cat holding a shotgun, dark wash skinny jeans with zippers at the bottom of each leg, and her signature green Converse. She'll kill anyone who makes her wear a skirt or dress.
Steryotype: rebellious rocker, probably, but lots of people count her as a musician or a tomboy
Dorm: whatever one you think is best, cause i have no idea which ones you're using. Avril Lavigne or Hayley Williams (i know theyre not in the series, but use your imagination!)
Boyfriend: Stephanie's single, but wouldnt mind a boyfriend
Other Info: Shaylene has a rubber bracelet for every day of the week: Paramore on Monday, Black Veil Brides on Tuesday, Green Day on Wednesday, Owl City on Thursday, Deadmau5 on Friday, Linkin Park on Saturday, and Kinks Of Leon on Sunday. And she loves her friends like family :)
And now my second OC...
Name: Nikki McHendry
Hometown: Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
Appearance: Nikki got her hair done to look like Hayley Williams', and has a peach colored skin tone, with light freckles on the bridge of her nose, and hazel eyes. She's a short 5 foot 4, but is skinny to balance it out. She has a narrow face, and plump peach lips.
Extracurricular(s): basketball (captain), drama club, choir, band with her friends (Nikki plays bass)
Fave Subject: Art
Snotty Scale (1-11): 2 or 3
Alpha Features: passionate, in control, confident
Alpha Track: modeling
Alpha Majors: bass playing, visual arts (painting, sculpting, etc...), acting
Alpha Minors: fashion designing and baking
Personality: despite her appearance, Nikki is a tough girl. She once beat up her muscly friends Stevie to prove that point. Speaking of guys, Nikki has a crush on her best friend Stephanie's might-as-well-be boyfriend, who just happens to be Stevie. Stephanie doesnt know though, so keep it a secret! Being the oldest of 3, Nikki has learned how to handle responsibility and knows how to put people in her place. She love crazy-fast beats that make everyone wanna dance and her bass down low.
Alpha Motto: "Im awesomer than a cat with a sniper. Yeah, i went there."
Interests: her bass, playing her bass, her friends, music, Twitter, fun, parties, and Stephanie's cat
Fave Color: fiery red, midnight blue, lilac purple
Can't Leave The House Without: her charm necklace and a cup of mango juice
Outfit: purple skinny jeans, burnout mid-thigh length red v-neck tee with a grey cami underneath, her usual charm bracelet, and dark green Chucks.
Steryotype: musician, rebel, stuff like that
Dorm: same as Stephanie :)
Boyfriend: she has a crush on Stephanie's crush (and a bestie to both of them) Stevie
Other Info: Nikki has a scar on her lower leg (she ditched school for a concert, and cut her ankle on the fence
Wow. It took me a day to create these characters. PLEASE USE THEM! and good luck with your story :) cant wait to read it!
| yougotrejected chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Hometown:australua (That might be spelled wrong)
Appearance:blond hair that goes to her ankels with a bow in it and blue eyes
Extracurricular(s):cheerleading, soccer, track and art if that is one
Snotty Scale (1-11):1
Alpha Features:her looks and artistic and sweetness
Alpha Track: artist and modeling
Alpha Majors: artistic talents and running
Alpha Minors: she is clutsy
Personality:nice random and can beat someone up when angered
Alpha Motto:you knows it
Interests: drawing, singing, acting
Fave Color:baby blue
Can' Leave The House Without:phone and ipod
Outfit:off the shoulder baby blue shirt that is cut off at the bellybutton black mini skirt and black high heels
Dorm:the high house
Boyfriend:you can pick
Other Info: i guess since we have the same last name i could be related to Roxie?
| YouGotBurned chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
You know I had to do this :)
Name: Emmaleigh Chaiki (Emma for short)
hometown: Honalulu, Hawaii
Appearence: long, curly brown hair that goes to the middle of the back. Brown eyes, tanned, freckles all over her face, skinny
Average: 3.9 (Stupid science)
Extracurricular: Basketball, Volleyball, track, Choir
Fav subject: Art
Snotty scale: 1
Alphe features: Loyal, friendly, tells you the truth even if it hurts
Alpha Majors: Singer, swimmer, artist
Alpha minors: Acrobatics
Personality: Outgoing, Random, shy, nice, funny, sarcastic
Alpha motto: 'Cause I'm cool like that'
Interests: Basketball, volleyball, writing, drawing
favorite color: Yellow and neon orange
can't leave house without: Her scetch pad
outfit: blue jean shorts, baggy, blue, V-neck, T- shirt that has a penguin that says 'cause I'm cool like that'
Steryotype: Quite mean girl
Dorm: which ever
Boyfriend: None, you can choose
Other info: PM me :)
| AkiGirl22 chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Name: Erika Marie Grace
Hometown: Hollywood, California
Appearance: Long curly/wavy red hair that glistens in the sunlight, blue-green eyes, tall and muscular build (a little skinny), petite features and a little flawless complexion
Extracurricular(s): Drama, Dance, Writing, Cheerleading, Drawing, Martial Arts, Gymnastics
Fave Subject: English & Drama
Snotty Scale (1-11): 11
Alpha Features: Attitude, Determination, Confidence, Control, Smart, Courage, Charming
Alpha Track: Does Martial Arts count?
Alpha Majors: Singing, Actress, Guitarist, Pianist
Alpha Minors: Dance, Writer, Drawing
Personality: Outgoing, Funny, Sarcastic at times, friendly, just try not to get on my bad side
Alpha Motto: I’m in it, to win it. If you need a challenge, risk it.
Interests: Singing, dancing, acting, writing, drawing, playing guitar and piano, studying, boys & if I’m in the mood, parties
Fave Color: Red
Can' Leave the House Without: her cell phone & guitar
Outfit: Dark skinny jeans, Blood Red shirt, & Brown cowgirl boots
Steryotype: The Extreme Bad Girl
Dorm: Which one’s the High House?
Boyfriend: I got my eyes on Sydney
Other Info: Roxie is like a sister to me
| April chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Name: Roxanne (Roxie) Heart
Hometown: Hollywood, California..
Appearance: The first thing that comes to mind you see Roxie is, "I wish I could be her." She's the girl in magazines that you wish you could be.. She has golden blonde hair that falls in perfect soft curls, big blue eyes like pools of crystals and blemish free skin that is the perfect shade of tan. She has high cheekbones and arched eyebrows. Her eyelashes are thick, long and dark and her lips are naturally pink and plump.
Extracurricular(s): Choir, drama, lacrosse, sailing, flirting
Fave Subject: Drama or Social Studies (my own, duh)
Snotty Scale (1-11): 11000000000000
Alpha Features: Her looks, her street smarts, her charming personality
Alpha Track: Modeling
Alpha Majors: Singing, acting modeling
Alpha Minors: Dancing
Personality: Roxie very well might be the sweetest girl you ever meet, but if you dare even try to cross her in any way, she becomes a witch with a B.
Alpha Motto: Bring it on
Interests: Singing, dancing, modeling, acting, boys, parties
Fave Color: Hot pink
Can't Leave The House Without: her cell phone
Outfit: White daisy dukes, a hot pink tanktop that loops around her neck, white gladiator sandals
Steryotype: The Beauty Queen
Dorm: Whatever the High House is
Boyfriend: Taz Brazille has been, trying to get her to go out with him
Other Info: if you use Erikka, she is like a sister to Roxie
| Muse of Storytelling chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Name: Esme ‘Ez’ Ross
Hometown : Montréal
Appearance: Ez has dark chocolate brown hair with auburn highlights, it is styled in an inverted bob. She usually wears it loose, but when she is practicing she ties it in two tiny pigtails or pulls it back with a clip. Her eyes are a dark amber with golden flecks in them, and her skin is a creamy tan. She is petite, about 5’0”, and slender, but has some nice curves.
Extracurricular(s): none (look to bio for the reason)
Fave Subject: Math
Snotty Scale (1-11): 2, 5 if you get on her bad side
Alpha Features: Determined, charismatic, hardworking, talented, cute
Alpha Track: Acrobat
Alpha Majors: Acrobatics, Gymnastics, Tumbling
Alpha Minors: Dance and Parkour
Personality: Outgoing and fun loving, Ez is a total extrovert, who makes friends faster than you can snap your fingers. Is extremely determined and stubborn. Very friendly, but can be blunt.
Alpha Motto: ‘Everyone has talents, I just use mine.”
Interests: Parkour, acrobatics, anything involving movement (she has ADHD)
Fave Color: Candy Apple Red
Can' Leave The House Without: Ipod
When she arrives at the AA: loose one shoulder turquoise top with white jean short shorts, and black sparkly high top converse.
Steryotype: ‘Everybody’s Friend’
Dorm: you decide
Boyfriend: No boyfriend, but she likes Dingo
| The Bloodiest Rose chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
((:3 Looking forward to the story! :D))
Name: Ria Claudia Gottschalk (Both names are German)
Born- Berlin, Germany
Appearance: Ria has silky auburn hair that reaches to her mid-shoulders, her fringe is rather long but she usually keeps it loose and instead, ties her long hair into a tight or loose bun (During concerts and recitals) but when she has nothing else to do, you will most likely see her walking around with her hair let loose. Her eyes are a soft yet sophisticated shade of forest green with flecks of dark, marine blue as well. She doesn't have a ski-slope nose but a small button one, she is blessed with flawless skin; if you exclude the scars at her thigh and the semi-calloused hands.
Average: 4.0 Though she hates History and Geography.
Cheerleading Squad, debating society, drama club and Band. She likes to stay at home and study sometimes.
Fave Subject: Music, Literature and Math.
Snotty Scale (1-11): 4
Alpha Features: Doesn't give up easily, honest, hardworking, not a backstabber, charismatic and talented. What else did I miss...?
Alpha Track: Violinist
Alpha Majors: Pianist, Guitarist (Bass only) and Archer.
Alpha Minors: Dancer, Swimmer, Acting and singing.
Personality: Okay. So. When you first see Ria, she seems like the cold, don't-touch-me-or-die type of girls. She's the one who doesn't like to socialize and is very quiet. BUT. That's because she's shy. She thinks that she doesn't have the confidence to attract friends or guys. So she usually stands aside and watches people's movements and reactions. Once you do get to know her, she seems fun and easygoing, maybe a slight perfectionist but still a great girl to hang out with (though she may seem quite shy). Overall, she's shy. She wants to make friends but she doesn't know how to. But when she does, she's the happiest Alpha in town... or island.
(To strangers): 'I wasn't born for nothing'
(To loved ones and friends): 'I will play this violin until my fingers bleed. I've done that twice and I will not hesitate to do that again! That shows how determined I am to get this score right!'
Interests: Playing the violin and other musical instruments, drawing, writing short stories and studying (only her favorite subjects though)
Fave Color: Emerald
Can' Leave The House Without: Her violin. It's practically her LITTLE SISTER.
When she arrives at AA- A black cardigan with pearl buttons, a bloody red dress that reaches to her knees with lace and Witchery sandals.
When she plays the violin or during recitals/performances- A ebony black Evening gown that touches her toes and wears silver sequined ballet flats.
Steryotype: 'The Perfectionist'
Dorm: I dunno, you decide. :D
Boyfriend: She doesn't have a boyfriend. But she's crushing HARD on Sydney.
Other Info: She's a mild perfectionist, willing to break her fingers just to perfect a score or note. She's part German and part Monacan, though she was raised in an English Speaking family.
| Livinginadaydream chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Yay. First one to apply.
Name: Alessia Summer Hinton.
Hometown: Long Beach, California, LA
Appearance: Ashlee has long wavy strawberry blonde hair which curls had the tips, dreamy ocean-blue eyes, heart-shaped face, tanned skin complexion. Her height is 5’9” ft and she is tall but very curvy.
Dance4Life Studio- Owned by her eldest sister, Hayden
Fave Subject: Modern Dance, English &
Snotty Scale (1-11): 1
Alpha Features: Determined, always tries her best, loyal friend and devoted to what she does.
Alpha Track: Dancer.
Alpha Majors: Dance, Singer/Songerwriter & Actress
Alpha Minors: Fashion Design & Sports.
Personality: Bubbly, caring, determined, sometimes stubborn, friendly,
Alpha Motto: Perfection has a Price
Interests: Dancing, writing her own songs, singing.
Fave Color: Amethyst purple.
Can't Leave the House Without: Ipod.
Outfit: When she arrives she is wearing a purple flowy top with black leggings and white ballet flats with gold star design on.
Stereotype: People usually think of her as model since she has a really curvy figure and stunning features.
Dorm: Author decides
Boyfriend: She’s got her eyes set on Taz Brazille, (But it’s a secret)
Other Info: She is allergic to bananas.