|Reviews for X Crossed|
| moms5thchild chapter 7 . 1/4/2012
This is a marvelous story! You must get back to it sometime soon!
| Flo des bois chapter 7 . 12/21/2011
I'm a huge fan of your X-men stories! ) They're all very well-written and you seem to have a thing for writing the characters perfectly!
This crossover is great! It's been such a long time since I've read one with Buffy in it and I have to say, just... wow! I just wanted to ask a question though: I've seen you've made Moira come back (for a short while), do you plan on writing a confrontation between Erik, Raven, Buffy and Charles?
Keep up the good job!
| SerenadingSerendipity chapter 7 . 8/21/2011
Hi , awesome chapter , as usual :)
And just to clear some things up , was the last section hinting at something that MIGHT happen ?
Can't wait for the next chapter !
| jrid808 chapter 7 . 8/19/2011
This has to be my favorite chapter yet. I can't wait for chapter eight, keep up the good work!
| James Birdsong chapter 7 . 8/19/2011
| enchantedlight chapter 6 . 8/9/2011
interesting! update soon!
| jrid808 chapter 6 . 8/9/2011
LOVED this chapter! Yay for mini-Giles! This was an amazing chapter, mainly because I'm pretty sure that there's some romantic interest between Buffy and Charles, which, y'know- yay!
I was extremely giddy when I checked to see if you updated and realized that you had! You MUST update again soon! I love this story so far.
| Random Frequent Flier Dent chapter 6 . 8/8/2011
yesyesYES for the appearance of young!Giles! I hope we'll see more of him in later chapters. This is great; update soon!
| mmooch chapter 6 . 8/7/2011
Is this one of those time paradoxes that because Buffy said Giles was her Watcher, he was sent to Sunnydale after Merrick died so he could be her Watcher?
| The Heroine With 1000 Faces chapter 5 . 8/6/2011
i..really do loveeee this. really. really. anddd-a virtual heart 3
| enchantedlight chapter 5 . 8/3/2011
great chapter! update soon!
| jrid808 chapter 4 . 8/3/2011
I forgot to mention in my review of Chapter 5 that I love the idea of Charles walking again! (-)
| jrid808 chapter 5 . 8/3/2011
When I first read that this would be a Buffy/X-Men crossover, I was a little skeptical. However, this story has proven to be very intriguing!
I think that you captured Buffy's personality and the way she was feeling during that period of her life exactly and the friendship that she's gaining with Charles seems to be just what both she and Charles need. The dialouge between Buffy and Charles is dark at times, but they appear to share a sort of chemistry with each other. Whether that chemistry is friendly or romantic remains to be seen.
I also like the addition of Bug! You've almost taken something that's supposed to have no emotion (a robot) and given it a personality! The banter between Buffy and Bug is very funny and I hope to see more of it throughout the story.
The only bad thing I have to say is that in the beginning, it was mentioned that there may be a relation between Buffy and Alex. I think that you should explore more of that.
I'd also like to say that you're a very good writer and I have added this story to my favorites. Keep creating!
| lee-efje chapter 3 . 7/24/2011
geez buffy really can't get any time out can she?
i'm glad she and charles are opening up a little to each other. sometimes an outsider is just what you need to give you some perspective and understanding.
poor charles, his condition is hard enough without the others suffocating him with their worries especially because it is all done out of love. the worries and protectiveness of the others are really understandable, erik left them and they've almost lost charles too ( in the movie i got the impression charles and erik became some sort of father figure for them or at least charles did) but they are a bit blind how more useless they are making the professor feel.
the scene between buffy and the robot and her telling him it's name was really funny and oh so buffy. i really like how buffy is treating bug, like he's a real person/creature instead of a robot.
i really hope nothing will happen to bug and buffy will be able to keep him after everything is finish and all.
will erik and raven be in the story too?
you know i'm surprised hank hasn't tried to kidnap bug or borrow him from buffy to examine and try to replicate, maybe it's a good thing for bug hanks too busy worrying about the professor :)
| lee-efje chapter 2 . 7/24/2011
so sorry for this late review but real life is persistently in my way of reading and reviewing fics...
once again a well written chapter. glad everyone got to know each other and though i was a bit disappointed with the lack of action or progression of the plot i understand the need to get both side acquainted and tell each other's story.
i'm very curious how buffy and charles will work together. they are both born leaders so they might clash with each other but then again they both know how to compromise. i can see both of them becoming great friends. they both have lost so much but still they both refuse to give up on the world.
a part of me really wants buffy to stay in this time line but i know she doesn't belong here and needs to get back or else she might whack up the time line. well maybe after all this she'll go and visit the professor in her own time.
how did charles know buffy was from the future? buffy asked which year it was to which charles gives her the answer to but then he questions her if she's really from the future. prior to this there's nothing that gives away how he he obtains this information. i'm a bit confused but don't worry it didn't effect my enjoyment reading this chapter.
last question. will buffy share with charles her one day stint as a mind reader?