| Reviews for Take Down |
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  Guest chapter 13 . 8/4/2021 Good story. Not overly dramatic. Nice touch with Roy and Johnny. |
 lovesanimals chapter 12 . 11/6/2014 I didn't comment on it the first time I read this story, but... you moved Roy and Johnny to Hawaii! They deserve a break from LA! |
| Lidil chapter 13 . 6/19/2012 Yep. Mini-Steve. Her name is Kono Kalakaua. |
| Lidil chapter 12 . 6/19/2012 ...Roy didn't bother to turn around... ..."Let's get moving, Johnny... That wouldn't be Roy DeSoto and Johnny Gage of L.A. County 51, would it? |
| francis2 chapter 13 . 7/22/2011 That was a super story! |
| francis2 chapter 12 . 7/22/2011 Hanolo sure didn't do himself any favors with this one. Now it's more than clear that there's a mob behind him. I think they should just put all four members of five-o into the same hospital room. Kono can take care of the others... |
| francis2 chapter 11 . 7/22/2011 Ha! Why couldn't the Judge believe Kono when he took Danny's word? Guess it's that Danny looks like he really suffered to get there. Well done, Five-O! |
| francis2 chapter 9 . 7/22/2011 So does Steve has a helicopter in his pocket or something? This is getting better and better! |
| francis2 chapter 8 . 7/22/2011 Maybe the noise will not only draw in Cutler's men but also Steve... I hope. So Chin cut the line on his computer - bad move! This guy without any record sure sounds fishy. |
| francis2 chapter 7 . 7/22/2011 Um, no, Danny, this is not a good idea. I hope you survive so Steve and Kono can kick your a$$ for thinking this way. |
| francis2 chapter 6 . 7/22/2011 Good idea to trade cellphones. I feel like this episode where they rescued the witness in the jungle. Steve in camo paint and fatigues is kind of hot. |
| lionora chapter 13 . 7/13/2011 Thank you very much for this wonderful story. As a long time reader of your numb3rs-stories I knew to wait til you finished posting. On that behalf, thank you also for finishing this story before posting. I really appreciate that. Now I hope you stick with the Five-O's, this fandom needs excellent writers like you. |
| maria chapter 13 . 7/12/2011 Loved the story and hope you will soon write and post more Hawaii 5-0 stories. Loved the tip of the cap to "Emergency". I read your author info. page and agree with you 100%, Thank you for being one of the few writers who care about and respect the readers and will say so! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work - thank you for writing and sharing! |
| Cokie316 chapter 13 . 7/11/2011 this was great! Somehow I missed the fact that there were a couple posted, so I caught them together. Loved it and I expect another story...soon! |
| Qweb chapter 13 . 7/10/2011 I really enjoyed this story. Hope to see another one soon. |