Reviews for Take Down
Guest chapter 13 . 8/4/2021
Good story. Not overly dramatic. Nice touch with Roy and Johnny.
lovesanimals chapter 12 . 11/6/2014
I didn't comment on it the first time I read this story, but... you moved Roy and Johnny to Hawaii! They deserve a break from LA!
Lidil chapter 13 . 6/19/2012


Her name is Kono Kalakaua.
Lidil chapter 12 . 6/19/2012
...Roy didn't bother to turn around...

..."Let's get moving, Johnny...

That wouldn't be Roy DeSoto and Johnny Gage of L.A. County 51, would it?
francis2 chapter 13 . 7/22/2011
That was a super story!
francis2 chapter 12 . 7/22/2011
Hanolo sure didn't do himself any favors with this one. Now it's more than clear that there's a mob behind him. I think they should just put all four members of five-o into the same hospital room. Kono can take care of the others...
francis2 chapter 11 . 7/22/2011
Ha! Why couldn't the Judge believe Kono when he took Danny's word? Guess it's that Danny looks like he really suffered to get there. Well done, Five-O!
francis2 chapter 9 . 7/22/2011
So does Steve has a helicopter in his pocket or something? This is getting better and better!
francis2 chapter 8 . 7/22/2011
Maybe the noise will not only draw in Cutler's men but also Steve... I hope.

So Chin cut the line on his computer - bad move! This guy without any record sure sounds fishy.
francis2 chapter 7 . 7/22/2011
Um, no, Danny, this is not a good idea. I hope you survive so Steve and Kono can kick your a$$ for thinking this way.
francis2 chapter 6 . 7/22/2011
Good idea to trade cellphones. I feel like this episode where they rescued the witness in the jungle. Steve in camo paint and fatigues is kind of hot.
lionora chapter 13 . 7/13/2011
Thank you very much for this wonderful story. As a long time reader of your numb3rs-stories I knew to wait til you finished posting. On that behalf, thank you also for finishing this story before posting. I really appreciate that. Now I hope you stick with the Five-O's, this fandom needs excellent writers like you.
maria chapter 13 . 7/12/2011
Loved the story and hope you will soon write and post more Hawaii 5-0 stories. Loved the tip of the cap to "Emergency". I read your author info. page and agree with you 100%, Thank you for being one of the few writers who care about and respect the readers and will say so! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work - thank you for writing and sharing!
Cokie316 chapter 13 . 7/11/2011
this was great! Somehow I missed the fact that there were a couple posted, so I caught them together.

Loved it and I expect another story...soon!
Qweb chapter 13 . 7/10/2011
I really enjoyed this story. Hope to see another one soon.
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