Reviews for Ouch!
sweet little chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
love it! Go Ahead & good luck...!
b1ackcat13 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
wow it was really good. awsome story!
Rain chapter 2 . 11/23/2011
Keep going with it. I've read a lot of fanfics and this is much better than a large portion of them, so just do what you want to do with this. I hope you keep going with this, it has a lot of potential plot-wise.
DeepBrokenLover chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
..ahhhww.. how sweet.. really love natsume especially when he steals kisses from mikan.,,
yunamoogle chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
Aww don't delete it it's good! :D
theundevelopedpsychopath chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
What's wrong with it? I find it really cute. Seriously. Don't judge yourself to quickly. Kay? Just change the summary and it'll be good as everyone else's work. :D
Kyra Raquiel chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
I don't think you should delete this story. Its very cute and I like it. :)

Your writing is not bad. (I've seen much worse!) But if it did not meet your expectations, I think going back and editing it is the best choice if the plot stuck to you for so long! Continue to write! Your only going to bet better! ;)
Nightly Gloom chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Aside from the grammatical mistakes (which is a lot, mind you), the story is adorable. It kinda reminded me of Mia in Princess Diaries. You should definitely write more. :)