Reviews for what we are is not all we may be
GrandMoff chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
very nice story. i liked the first chapter better than the second, frankly, because there was so much focus on negativity in the second that it didn't feel balanced like the first. also, the second one gave us something that's always interesting: the character's motivation!

nice portrayal of the tools of the trades, the ideas of the characters, and you focused on a very interesting aspect of the game. well done, thank you for writing and posting this story.