Reviews for Lost without Zara
siren264 chapter 3 . 12/21/2011
ooh crule! but still you are definetly the best writer i have ever seen on fan fic! thats a really good complement i dont normaly like the peoples work on hear!
siren264 chapter 2 . 12/21/2011
ok so this is befor she met astly and shes doing it to protect him not cuz she loves astly more ok i understand...
siren264 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
! why why did you do it zara and nick wher made for eachother! oh and your writing is really really good!
Musia888 chapter 3 . 8/19/2011
Really nice story so far...

please keep writting!
Afterworld EverDawn chapter 3 . 7/10/2011
I like it so far. It has just the right amount of detail and the plot is fabulous for your first whack at things. the only thing that I found was the structure. Your paragraphs are huge and can be made into smaller ones, even by simply separating the dialogue when I new character speaks.

Regardless, even this last chapter has been a major improvement from your first, and I can honestly say I'd read more if you chose to write another chapter or another story )