Reviews for Complete Package
MegpieLovesTiva chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Awww... :)
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
I feel like crying, hahaha. In a good way, that is.

I don't know why! I realize I'm not the one being proposed to, but I still feel like crying, oh...

*Breathe breathe breathe*

'Tis good. I like it. And-and-and he's good at proposing, even if he doesn't know it.

*Sniffles*

I'm okay! It's a beautiful story, I love it.

~Soph
TonyandZivaUK chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
I remember reading this one ages ago! I looooooo ooooo oooo oooo ve it! :D
OutCold chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
You already know I love this, but I'm more than willing to tell you again and at more length!

Just in the first sentence, Tony's nerves radiate out of the screen, it's amazing. I hate you and your writing awesomeness. Love how he just soaks up everything about Ziva, very effective.

And I laughed at the "Four words wasn't going to get him very far." It's a brilliant line, I adore Tony so much.

Holding my breath for the proposal even though I know what happens...

Aww, I feel sorry for Ziva in the brief moment she thinks Tony is taking the piss... she should know better, he's not that harsh. And "I meant to throw that out" - YES. Because you don't care about Ray because he's a dick.

Lol, the complete it's look thing is just so Tony. Had to say that. And of course Ziva isn't expecting it! It's pretty much completely random. But brilliant.

"Not a promise to be there in the future, when I get back from some mission thing" - AGAIN YES BECAUSE RAY IS A COMPLETE AND UTTER TWAT.

Aww, the ending is absoultely sickly sweet. But in a good way. This is such an adorable ficlet (since it's not a drabble or a oneshot, apparently, though I'd call it a oneshot, just a short one).

And what do you mean horrid? Ha, you're funny. That was a joke, right?

xxx
The Lady Grace chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
I loved this! Aww Tony, I wish he lived in my town. I always love your work.

I don't know if you remember this, but you and I have the same birthday. So in case I forget, happy early (by about 7 days) birthday!

-Gracie
Strawberry Shortcake123 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
This is soooo sweet! And it's completely in-character! great job!
Different Child chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Damn you woman. XDD It's not horrid but the point is that it's AWESOME! And i want more. P XD I always want more. I"m such a demanding reader and lazy writer. GREAT WORK! DD
13NCISgirl chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Love It!
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
really good. Nice job
VioletHawk chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
So was that a proposal or simply a promise to start a relationship? :)
robertwnielsen chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Oh, too cute! Love the "empty box" idea! Although I admit to not being too familiar with the characters (having been born in the '80s and growing up on "Airwolf," and "Knight Rider," and not watching NCIS as much as I should), the story is still extremely enjoyable. XD

Very well written...I wouldn't have suspected it to be "hurriedly written" if I hadn't read it in your a/n. Not "horrid" at all. XD

robertwnielsen
LittleHogwartsGirl chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Aw, cutely-cutely-CUTE :D