|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Time Of Change|
| GBTtown chapter 19 . 3/3
Great escape (no pun intended), good chapter
| Hoppy159 chapter 45 . 2/26
I've enjoyed this story a great deal. The Harry you've portrayed is pretty mature and powerful, and it is refreshing to see. I know you'll probably hate to hear this, but I hope you'll find time to continue the story soon. It is really worthy to see through to completion some day, I hate good stories that are not finished and abandoned.
| Hoppy159 chapter 38 . 2/26
I was very sad at Katie's death. Harry can't seem to catch a break, one step forward, two back it seems.
| BlazeStryker chapter 35 . 2/19
Spellcheck is your friend, but it is also easily distracted.
You have to have a care it doesn't give your list of possible spellings a word meaning quite the reverse of what you were going for..
The example in this chapter was in how Harry flicked his wand in his duel with Crossley. I rather think you meant he did this "surreptitiousl"y, meaning in a subtle fashion, when auto-correct went and made it into "suspiciously", which is quite against your likely intent.
Aside from things like this, your chapter and this story are excellent. You've managed to have Harry's problems with Ron and the others displayed well without being anvilicious, and I thank you for that.
| chris678 chapter 45 . 2/9
finally to this point, been waiting for a while
| chris678 chapter 32 . 2/8
okay so if dark magic is more powerful because its charged by strong emotions then what about a spell powered by happiness, but happiness isnt debilitating, so what about orgasm, a powerful emotion based spell is harder to block and its just debilitating enough to follow up with an easy stun.
| Fury074 chapter 38 . 2/5
Millicent Bagnold was a woman.
| Fury074 chapter 15 . 1/31
Your spelling needs work.
Still a good story thus far. Please update soon.
| Fury074 chapter 7 . 1/31
You don't need to use so many commas. You also need to watch out for the homophone words.
| Fury074 chapter 6 . 1/31
Ginevra, not Generva.
| DocDoc chapter 38 . 1/30
First let me say that Im really digging your story! Great job. I will say that killing Katy Bell, really bothered me. Normally I don't care about characters being killed off but I liked her! Keep up the great work!
| brainthief chapter 45 . 12/9/2013
I like this Harry. Driven, independent, and by now performing admirably, but with enough flaws to leave him comparable to canon.
I don't think I've seen Hagrid yet in the story. With his somewhat more sociable demeanor I would imagine him seeking out his 'biggest friend' at some point. Especially now that he has questions about unicorns.
Keep on writing. I've liked your work so far and would love to read more of it.
| Aschill chapter 38 . 11/30/2013
why did Kati have to die :(
| GrammarHammer chapter 15 . 11/22/2013
I read your response regarding grammar some chapters back. However, the only time you correctly spelled the contraction of you are (you're) was in that response, I truly believe you just don't know the difference between "your" and "you're". Similarly, since you consistently confuse "there" with "their" (and vice versus), I believe you simply do not understand the difference of those two words. Shame really, since every time you make these silly mistakes, it detracts from the writing.
| SeverlyLate chapter 39 . 11/22/2013
Well, the story becomes ever more annoying as it progresses.
Annoying bickering in the order about potter, annoying drivel about ,,horrible,, hocruxes... Really ,,one have to kill someone to make it,,!?
How unusual! Stop, isn't it what every DE does with no hesitation?
For fuck sake...