This was a phenomenal read and an engaging story. Thank you for writing a brilliant fan fiction that I had so much joy reading.

Great story thanks for sharing hae fun

That was so sweet, such a loving Edward. Thanks for writing

Thank you

Thanks for this outtake.

Edward was adorable with his daughter snuggled against him and playing with his son in the sandbox. Those mothers were rude talking behind their backs and keeping their kids from playing with Isaac because they don’t agree with how they raise their kids. Brava to Bella for defending her husband and educating those ladies.

Great story. So sad to see this end. I’m glad Edward and Bella got their happy ending. Thanks for showing Edward’s adoption of young Isaac. Aww! The little family is living in Bella’s Cape Cod. Lovely.

It’s a shame Bella was not able to resume her job, but I like that she’s helping Edward and Shelly write a book for kids about understanding her experience.

I’m glad Bella is working out her issues with her sister. It may take time, but they will be the better for it.

As for any extras/future-takes, my suggestions would be Jake’s reaction to the baby and being home again, Edward’s parents’ reaction to being grandparents and the engagement (they got lost in the shuffle with so many Swans), their first time making love, and the adjustment of Bella and Edward having more children.

Ah, yes! How perfect. I thought Bella assumed, but I’m glad they cleared that up right away… and Edward proposed. Yay! The icing on the cake. How lovely. Isaac deserved no less.

I love that Renee was the first to find out before the family got to celebrate both the birth and the engagement. I just wished Edward’s parents were included as well.

Hilarious that they have come full circle and now Edward IS Bella’s fiancé and the father to her child.

What horrendous luck! Poor Edward had to overcome so many obstacles just to get to the hospital. So glad that he didn’t miss the birth.

I found it funny how relieved the staff member was when Edward arrived. She seemed as happy as Bella was to see him. LOL It made perfect sense for Bella to have Edward join her in the delivery room. It feels like she’s letting him know he can be dad if he wants.

Thanks for the ILY. Hope Bella is okay and remembers the exchange.

I loved their playful goodbye after their first date. Halloween was fun too.

Glad that Bella and Alice started talking again.

I like how nervous Bella was at meeting Edward’s parents and that they brought Jake along for the holiday. Poor Emmett having to keep the peace in the car ride between Rosalie and the dog.

It wouldn’t be Thanksgiving if someone didn’t have to make quick run to the store. LOL. Wassail sounds delicious. I have to give it a try.

Oh my! I’m glad Bella wasn’t alone when her water broke. I hope Edward makes it to the hospital in time. S

Edward is such a romantic at heart.

The date was lovely. I’m enjoying how their relationship is developing and the humor of him taking her to dinner in his parents’ backyard with his college pal catering.

Charlie was a bit harsh on Edward in the courthouse. Let him grieve the woman he thought he knew. Edward had no idea that Tanya was capable of harming Charlie’s daughter, let alone anyone else. The woman clearly needs help.

It was sweet gesture of Edward’s mom to invite the Swans to Thanksgiving dinner.

Aww! It was so romantic that Edward picked up Bella for their date and took her to a romantic outdoor dinner for two. Yeah, it did feel like prom with her family hovering around.

Best moment of the chapter was Bella telling Edward that she trusts him and knows he only wants to make her happy. Chef kiss! They have come so far.

Ha! Ha! Bella’s condition is that she wants to see her dog. I loved that Jake was just as happy to see her but was careful not to hurt her.

It’s good Edward and Bella talked about Tanya and what happened when she attacked her. I wonder whether Bella made amends with Alice. She hasn’t been around much. Tanya has to be held responsible for her actions. I’m glad Edward is going to the hearing with Charlie. His parents will probably be there to support their friends.

I look forward to this date and Halloween sounds like fun too. I hope Bella enjoys the spa day and dress shopping with her mother and Rose. Too bad Alice couldn’t be there.

Bella’s family appears to be repairing the damage in their relationship and accepting Edward’s romance with her. It was adorable how Emmett and Edward fed their pregnant ladies’ cravings. What a touching moment between Charlie and Bella with the purple cow. I also loved that Charlie invited Edward to watch the game with Emmett and him.

I’m curious what’s Bella’s condition for going on a date with Edward. I would think she doesn’t want to go anywhere crowded, maybe self-conscious about walking with the cane.

Aww! Bella remembers Edward’s tender cheek kisses and she’s opening up about the past. They finally talked about her ex and what happened with her family. I like the progress achieved in their relationship. This chapter was worth the wait.

That scene with Bella cursing at seeing the walker was hilarious.

Yeah, I know Edward was just trying to make her feel better and show her what she missed, while conveying what they both mean to him. I just felt everything his mom told him that Bella might feel. It was just not a gesture to do without her involvement, especially since she missed so much already. It could have been something they did together.

I’m glad Bella took some time and worked through her feelings to see it as the gift he meant it to be. The hug and kiss were lovely. Aww! She remembered his cheek kisses.