|Reviews for While You Were Knocked Out Cold|
| Hope4more chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
I think Bella has no family and leads a pretty monotonous life. I think she will welcome the change. I hope anyways
| Babette12 chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
I'm going with the 'she's a surrogate mother for Alice, who has given her a place to stay and stocked her pantry and fridge with the foods she wants Bella to eat in order to have a healthy baby' angle. Or, she could be a surrogate for Shelly, and Alice is her go-between. The dietary restrictions could be imposed by either. As could the place to stay.
No ICE? Man, you are making this difficult. Except that does mean she's probably not in a serious relationship. Well, other than having the puppy, whom I love. I'm glad it's only been about 24 hours. Poor little boy was probably frantic and felt awful for messing.
I find it interesting that Edward wants answers but isn't calling the two people who have called her to get them. Then again, if he did, he might be outed as not Bella's fiancee and no longer able to see her. Such a conundrum. At the very least he needs to get in touch with her bosses to let them know what happened (I'm going with Shelly).
This is really cute. I'm giggling over how this is all going to blow up on him. She'll have to give him a little bit of a break, though. He did rescue the dog.
| jamie.baker68gmail.com chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
LOL, i love this story so far,cant wait to read more.
| xxxbulletxxx chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
Makes me wonder if she went to a sperm bank to get pregnant. It doesn't make sense not to have anything personal in your own home to show if you had a bf or family.
| Hope Cullen94 chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
I LOVE IT! I'm not a fan of Jake unless he is gay, Bella's brother, or my personal favorite a DOG! I'm glade he isn't the baby daddy that's all i got to say! i love this chapter and i hope all that organic food belonged to Bella's recent ex or something. if not I'm okay with it! right now I'm praying that maybe Bella was tired of being lonely and went to her doctor and got a sperm donation and the sperm donor is Edward! That will make me really happy but hey its ur story! anyway i loved it and loved it and I WANT MORE PLEASE! pretty please with an Edward Cullen on top?
ps: keep writing i cant wait for more!
| motherbeatrice chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
well I would think I died and went to heaven if I woke up and found Edward next to me. I wish.
I hope Bella will want to get to know Edward, and I love that Jake is the dog, how appropriate.
LOve the story...
| NienkevH chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
Wauw, even though there are no vampires inside this story? (please tell me there will be...) I really like this :)
| KitsuShel chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
Awwww! I wonder if her solitary lifestyle means that baby daddy won't be an issue? Hmmmm.
I love Jake as the dog! I'm using it my next fic, too. There's a country song, from the 90s iirc, called Feed Jake, about someone taking care of this guys dog when he dies. It's really sad. )
| careolinagirl chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
Nice roll reversal here. She reminds me of the Cullens with her vegetarian lifestyle and lovely, but not overly personal home. I love that Jake's the dog, and that he doesn't have a problem with Edward. I now have two theories running my head on the possible baby daddy. Either, IVF because she wants a baby, but doesn't really have a life or boyfriend, or it's James who will come in as a big jerk at the end like the movie. Catch with 2nd one is that she's pregnant, not easily called off without continued interaction for the future. I'm going to hope for the IVF storyline. Can't wait to see what you've actually planned!
| KimberlyAnnT chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
hmmm.. I think Bella got artificial impregnated..Great update
| avidreader69 chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
I think Edward has it right that she is lonely. Which leads me to think that baby daddy was is a spermsicle.(Aka frozen pop!)
| Sarah chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
Still so creepy he hasn't tried to get in touch with anyone. Should have been the first thing he did! I am pretty sure there is no excuse... I hope hes able to redeem himself. But I'm still reading
| LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
The only time I like Jake is when he's a dog. I cracked up at your onion/ogre comment. My 2 yo has watched Shrek at least 50 times in the last week. I know it by heart.
| Maplestyle chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
Poor Bella, her life seems so lonely from the looks of the house. Poor Jake being locked up there all that time. It's a good thing Edward went to her house. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Twlightforever chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
Still do not too much about her. I wondering if she was trying to have a baby on her own?