Reviews for While You Were Knocked Out Cold
cshorte chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Loved it!
xxxbulletxxx chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Jake deserves a treat for knocking Tanya down! haha. Brunch can't come soon enough. He needs to just man up and get rid of that annoying, baby talking chick.
one of eddie's girls chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Oh Tanya your so delusional...lol... Good boy Jake... I loved it.
ohtobeyoung chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Loved the Jake/Tana scene. Know he feels he doesn't belong with Bella, but really there has been no one checking on her. Can't wait for this to move on. Wondering who daddy is.
Cullenosopy chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Why are wonderful, intelligent, and handsome Edwards always with bitchy, shallow, and phony Tanyas? Why I ask you? (I know, I just had to ask)

Getting rid of Tanya is toooooo easyyyyyyyyy. Edward, repeat after me: I have found someone else. Five easy words. I have found someone else. Just say those words to Tanya and head out like a baby. If she causes a fuss, sick Jake on her. Stand up to the effing bitch, be a man for chrissake. Step up to the plate. Grow some huevos. The time for action is now!

Seeeeeeeeee how easy that was? I tried to tell you!

Hand not raised. Now if Bella was giving the massage...

Thanks!
Hazelnut4o6 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Ahhhh! I get so excited when you update! But then I read much too fast! Love it!

I bet Bella doesn't remember her encounter with Edward. Ha!
Maplestyle chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
*raises hand and waves frantically*

Though I must admit I do have an "Edward" that rubs my feet and cooks and cleans!

I am currently putting Tanya in the bunny boiling category of crazy! Can't wait for the next chapter.
DutchGirl01 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Loved this chapter, can't wait for more!
jESS chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
i liked it. :] check out this cool story.

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RogueRaina chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
I'd love an Edward foot massage!

I think Edward should take his new guard puppy to brunch. Tanya might just break up with him if he says that he's adopting the fluf-ball.
savannah.p chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
wow, Tanya is such a female dog, i wonder who the baby's father is?
bellababy16 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
so good please update soon
GinnyW 31 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Good dog, Jake. Good dog.

Edward, man up and tell Tanya exactly what you think of her!
sersmom chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
I would definitely love the foot massage! This is great! I am so looking forward to that brunch.
JTStyle chapter 2 . 7/19/2011
You had me till the bit about the fetus, lol. I just don't really care for stories featuring Bella pregnant with somebody elses baby. It just feels wrong. Good luck with the rest of it though, you are an awesome writer.
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