|Reviews for While You Were Knocked Out Cold|
| Babette12 chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
What in the Hello Dolly? ROFLOL! I am so borrowing that from you! I laughed so hard.
I don't know how Edward got with Tanya in the first place if she sounds like that. My husband wouldn't have given her a second glance, except maybe to cringe. Whining sets both our teeth on edge.
I think he's going to have a harder time breaking up with her than he realizes. At least he didn't propose, so that will make it slightly easier.
Will he try to find out who the father is? Who her family is? I must say I think things will be interesting when Bella wakes up!
Loved it, as always. xoxo!
| Twlightforever chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
Loving this story. I hope he can make a clean brake something tells me it is not going to be that easy. Enjoy your vacation!
| bellskindagirl chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
i was like WUV YOU what are we five. Annoying!
Mama Cullen on the other hand who can truly hate Esme come on really maybe just clueless but I've yet to meet an Esme who did not fall for Bella, but who knows what will this one bring
| bellskindagirl chapter 2 . 7/3/2011
ok super surprised about baby Swan i let out a bark of laughter and my mother looked at me weird and said "you ok"
i said "fine"
but the like i must compliment you on is the following-
This was the land of the critically injured and ill. He imagined the Grim Reaper with a reserved seat in the waiting room, casually twisting his bony hands together until someone died.
i got chills excellent writing
| bellskindagirl chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
oh my gosh very cool best kind of mistaken identity lol can't wait for the rest!
| FeistyPalooka chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
Annoying indeed! Esme seems like typical worrisome Esme. Cant wait till Bella wakes up!
| Sarah Beesley chapter 3 . 7/3/2011
WHY WOULD HE STILL BE WITH HER? I HATE THAT! BUT IT TOTALLY HAPPENS.
I'M SUCKED IN... LIKE ALL YOUR STORIES!
| bemily chapter 3 . 7/2/2011
I love his optimism that he can gentely break up with Tanya. I hope I am wrong but she doesn't seem like she will go quietly.
| one of eddie's girls chapter 3 . 7/2/2011
Uh can Tanya get anymore annoying? Good chapter cant wait to see whats next
| dinotopian chapter 3 . 7/2/2011
| cusic1981 chapter 3 . 7/2/2011
Love it! Tanya is very annoying I can't stand grown ups especially grown women who talk like little kids especially if they are talking to other adults. So far Esme just seems oblivious. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| greeklove chapter 2 . 7/2/2011
Poor Edward...he's way over his head ..will he stick around?
| Slower Than Stampeding Turtles chapter 3 . 7/2/2011
ahhh, I'm too lazy to sign in, lol. . .
holy crap ! pregnacy ? -.- wow, usually I HATE it when people have Bella pregnant with a baby that ISN'T of Edward's manly part,
BUUUT fortunatley I don't mind for THIS story ? :D
yay ! I can't wait for your next update, woohoo ! :)
| kuntrygal chapter 3 . 7/2/2011
Lol oh my! Wuv u Eddiekins! Tanya is way annoying!
| Cullenosopy chapter 3 . 7/2/2011
Esme is OK with me. Yes, Tanya is the C-word; although she reminded me a bit of Lavender Brown with the: "Eddieeeeee, wuv you," And the fact that she expected him to end all of their conversations that way. Time to ditch that bitch.