Reviews for While You Were Knocked Out Cold
edwardcu77en7over chapter 3 . 7/19/2011
what in the world was he thinking getting involved with that woman? and worse... thinking of marrying her? is he a push over?
trisha63 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Oh Melly, you naughty gal having Jake attack Tanya, well he did'nt attack her but you know what I mean! Edward holding Jakes face and telling him "Good boy Jake, Good boy" - priceless! If I had been Jake I would have at least nipped at her ankle or behind just for general principles. Poor Edward feels like he is doing something wrong, but in all reality he is truly like an old time knight in shining armor who is tending to Bella as best as he can considering the situation. Okay I am sure I am with every other reader of this story in wanting a foot rub from the wonderful pretty one and I certainly wouldn't mind him folding my delicates! LOL Hope you and your kiddos are enjoying their summer. Take care, Trisha :}
edwardcu77en7over chapter 2 . 7/19/2011
omg! she is pregnant! I dnont know how good is that for a fairytale romance :S but still... poor girl
elaine67 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Please please let him get rid of her , maybe he could take Jake with him, I bet bella wakes up while he's at brunch and he chooses Bella over Tanya ...yay
shadowbride chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
both hands raised for the foot rub. Ill fight anyone for it!

Edward really needs to ring Alice. I think Bella would be grateful!

Great chapter
misscullen76 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
I love you so much because this story had me on the floor cracking up laughing!Great job can't wait for the next review!
S1203 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Poor Tanya, but I am glad that she is so simple minded and not really mean person. Thank you. :)
jamiebaker68 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Loved it, cant wait to read more.
babybaby15 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Another great chapter I loved it
maybebaby23 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Loved it, please update soon!,!
edwardcu77en7over chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
awww! while you were sleeping is one of my fav chickfliks! Im glad you plot about it ;) I bet Edward would be dreamy here!
TrulyOutrageous chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Love it! Jake and Tanya so hilarious.
nicole1962 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
good job jake:)
Hope Cullen94 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
cullenbaby94 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
great update :)
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