Reviews for Shades of Gold
PinkSaphira chapter 2 . 5/20/2015
WHAT?! no more chapters?! ;; oh come on! I love this already! please update soon! and please make it so that Al, Ed, and Tristen go to the new land together. maybe even Sarah, but then Winry would be alone and sad. I want Ed's kids to see how awesome Ed is! and for heavens sake Al, get hitched! this song reminds me of this story- watch?vosW5rNfyBrE thought you might enjoy listening to it. again, love this story! beginning of a new grand adventure of the Elric brothers!
xBookEaterx chapter 2 . 4/1/2015
Please update!
Katerie T. Phillips chapter 2 . 12/30/2014
Ah, and the second chapter is just as good as the first. Ed and Al are such good brothers, and you write them really well. Poor Winry. I can't wait for you to update!
Katerie T. Phillips chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
This is such a cool fic! I love the idea of Al finally learning Alkahestory (I always wanted him and Ed to learn about it in canon, but alas...) and chi-sensing. Also, interesting that Ed's chi would still be so vibrant but that there's less of it. I love it so far!
hodges2 chapter 2 . 10/27/2014
is this the last chapter?
snakebuttt chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
Oh. My. God.
I-you-this-
THIS IS FATE!
I mean, I even wrote on your other story that I'd like to see Al and Winry find out about Ed's impalement, but it was already here waiting for me! It's like a dream come true!
I've noticed that this story isn't yet finished (hooray for future updates!) but it might clear a few things if Ed actually explained "how" he used up his life (I noticed he was pretty vague in explaining) - maybe he could show the scar or something. One thing I don't understand though; how does Winry not know? I mean, he's had two children with her, she's had at LEAST two times where Ed's been undressed enough for her to see the past-wound, right?
The Elrics need some lovely, soft, maybe slightly humorous, closure time. And Tristan and Sarah are so cute - I hope they don't get too carried away with their alchemy to upset Winry though; I felt sorry for her.
Welp, you sure know how to locate my feels, rip them to shreds, put back the strings and then muddle the strings up so I feel conflicted, because I understood why Ed didn't tell them but feel upset for everyone else. SO MANY FEELS GAH!
Can't wait for more updates!
Wildface97.
The Taloned Merlin chapter 2 . 11/15/2012
TBC, huh? I certainly hope you update; you've left this story hanging for a while now!

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Your style is clean and tight, and you nailed the brothers' (and Winry's) personalities perfectly. I'd write more on this, but I have trouble commenting properly on an unfinished story.

-Merlin
Aisukuri-Mu Studio chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
Oh, oh, I do wish this would be continued. Dx How you've managed to pull my heartstrings with this one! Another mighty excellent work! I LOVE THE SIBLING LUFF! Gah. Alphonse. And Edward. Are each other's best medicine. And the EdWin here is so cute and so happy and they're family just warms my heart.

You're just...messing with my emotions. D: I would tell you to stop, but I can't, because I'm enjoying your writing too much.
Sukee93 chapter 2 . 7/22/2012
Hi :)

So. I'm wandering how to start this review. xD

At first, I want you to know that as english is not my first language, my vocabulary is kind of poor for telling you how great this story is - and I apologize. So, I'd like you to imagine all the best compliments that an author could ever receive, and that's pretty much it. :)

I ended up at your story while I was looking for fictions where Ed could not perform alchemy anymore (so post-manga), and were he and Al would be the main characters. So I was really delight with yours!

Plus, the plot. Gosh, I'm down on my knees to congratulate you right now! I-just-love-it! I like how you introduced the characters, how familiars the children are (I mean by that that I accepted them right away in the story), the relashionship between the two brothers, and between Ed and Winry (and at first I'm not a big fan of this pairing, so see, you've done pretty well with it lol)

And finally, your writting. *clap hands* What can I tell? Just that this is wonderfully written, that's all.

So I'm hoping with all my heart that you will continue this perfect story (and it is perfect), because I want to know more about Ed and his 'chi', if he finally will accept the journey with his brother, if Al will teach Tristan and Sarah alchemy... I'm craving for more! :D

In deep hope for your next update
Twisha chapter 2 . 6/25/2012
Awesome story! Please keep writing!
Starlit Purple chapter 2 . 6/7/2012
I love the start you have here. The bond between Ed and Al is still just as strong as it was when they were younger, and you've captured that well. I love the picture you've painted of the future. Your characterization is very well done and even the kids and the random townspeople are convincingly real. Can't wait to see more of the current going's on in Amestris (well, and the world from Al's perspective), I'll be keeping up with this one. :)
bashfulglowfly chapter 2 . 6/2/2012
I discovered this story via a piece of artwork you did on DeviantArt.

I like where you're going with this. The theory that Ed has used up all of his chi is new and different. I like you.

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Keep up the good work.
zealousfreak27 chapter 2 . 1/27/2012
But... What happens? There was angst, which was good and well executed. But what happens?
zealousfreak27 chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
The angst! It's coming! I feel it! Mwhahahaha!
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 2 . 12/22/2011
Love it~ ;) Looking forward to a new chapter~!
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