|Reviews for A Quiet Fire: Outtakes|
| karenec chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
oh, this edward makes me so happy. i love that his eloquent writer's brain goes all scrambled when the clothes start to come off.
i think my favorite line is: "All pants need to go."
| cejsmom chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
See, he really is such a good guy, not like you didn't already know that though. :)
| Capricorn75 chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
So hot and sweet and perfect!
| cutie123r chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Awww bb Edward :)
| cahtx chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
This was such a nice surprise in my inbox! Thanks for this chapter!
| DreamerRoad chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
So, sooooooooooooo good. Beautiful. Love revisiting this story, thank you!
| abw05 chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
Aww~I miss this fic. That was def just as hot as reading it in Bpov. Thank you!
| Lettersie17 chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
"I love the idea of being her first—and last, if I get my way"
Seriously, I could re-quote half of this amazing outtake. I LOVE this Edward SO SO much. He does things to me.. everything inside his head is how I imagined him. Like when he says I kept a condom hoping this would happen, and how he's been thinking about her since he was 15. My god I love this boy, I never want to let him go.
I don't know if you're ever going to write the outtake when they first see each other again, but I would DIE for that one.
Just adore this story so so much. I may be re reading again :)
| sherylb chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
That was so sweet!
| tinaconnor chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
What is there to say except a big, huge, sloppy thank you. You are brilliant
| Nonita chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
You make me very happy with your outtakes.
| Edward's Eternal chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
Loved these two...
Thanks for the out take !
Enjoyed EPOV... well done !
| Lux123 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Ah, I remember this. :) Loved Edward's protectiveness.
My favorite part: "She's my friend, right? I can look if I want. Whatever." :)
| KJHN chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
My sweet friend Magnolia. I just got to read this outtake right now. Sigh. Edward's protectiveness and love for young Bella then had me in knots and tears. Reading that scene from BPOV in the original story broke my heart, especially as her copy of Anne of Green Gables (one of my all-time favorite books too) was ruined by those bitches Lauren and Jessica. I was so glad Edward was watching out for her. Bless his sweet heart. This outtake just reminds me about AQF-that story was just lovely. One of the loveliest ever. xo, KJ
| i.luv.twilight2 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Edward's rescue was heart warming. Even at that age he was drawn to Bella. Great story.