|Reviews for closest to heaven that I'll ever be|
| MusicIsAllWeHave chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
While I do enjoy the idea of the story, it seems like it's kinda rushed and could be written out better. I mean that in the best way possible. If you would like, I could help you out with the chapters to make them smoother, and also to fix a few of the grammatical errors that I've seen. I love Boondock Saints and Harry Potter, and I would love to be apart of one of the few crossovers between the two. I would write my own story, but every time I try, I never get around to finishing it XD So let me know if you would like my help, I could then give you my email over a PM or something to make it all easier.
If you accept my help, send me a PM with the ideas you have for the story? It will make it easier to make suggestions for the story if I know what will be happening. If you don't want my help, no worries, and I'll still read this story to see where it goes
| ILoveAnime89 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Update again soon. .