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Guest chapter 11 . 4/18/2013
i would be so scared if i were in Bella's place but make another chapter
TwilightAddict71484 chapter 11 . 1/30/2013
oh shit...wonder if the killer is a vamp or at least knows about them? post again soon. i have a feeling that The Major is not gonna be easy to control.
solongandthanks chapter 11 . 12/20/2012
Repeated chapter.
Smileyface Devil chapter 11 . 12/20/2012
I noticed a few times that you did this, its Esme with an "e" not Esma with an "a". I didn't know if you did it intentionally or not so I thought I'd point it out. Love the chapter, update soon.
TwilightAddict71484 chapter 10 . 9/6/2012
oh goody...let the killer take bella...and who's brillant idea was this again? post again soon.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/27/2012
Cant wait for more!
tinkerbear10 chapter 10 . 8/27/2012
i love it alot alot alot alot alot and hope there is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oo much more to it!
psychovampirefreak chapter 10 . 8/27/2012
Awesome story so far! :-)
TwilightAddict71484 chapter 9 . 6/14/2012
damn egos getting in the way..glad Bella sorted that shit out real quick like. post again soon.
JaziD chapter 8 . 6/13/2012
i dont understand the way you wrote this chapter
NeverEndingImagination1210 chapter 7 . 2/27/2012
Upload soon! I can't wait!
ReadyToRun16 chapter 5 . 11/3/2011
Whoever did that to Bella and Jakey (who's her brother, I'm guessing) is gonna be sorry they ever did that! No one messes with the Cullens!
ReadyToRun16 chapter 4 . 11/3/2011
Whoawhoawhoawhoa who the hell is after Bella?
ReadyToRun16 chapter 3 . 11/3/2011
I love the Major! And Jasper too of course!
ReadyToRun16 chapter 2 . 11/3/2011
Haha loved the Major's POV at the end. Quite unusual, I've never read a Jasper/Bella fic that did that. Nice change, I liked it.
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