Reviews for Time Marches On
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
POOR DARIA. AT LEAST, HER EX-TEACHER, MR. O'NEIL IS STILL HER FREIND.
Anon chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
This is, I think, a pretty realistic departure from the fantasy of the series into what Daria's future might hold if she were real.
rabbit chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
This was... horribly depressing. There was interesting things, like with Kevin and Daria's Dad, but the rest was right down abysmal. Daria didn't seem like herself at all and it felt insulting to see her end up like that. Brittany dying like that should be more then just a blurp and it would have been interesting to know more about the other characters like the rest of the Fashion Club, Mac and especially Jane. Why wasn't Jane there? Did she die? Did she and Daria fight and never make up? Unless you plan on continuing this you rather left the glass half empty on satisfactory for reading this and taking the time to tell you what I thought of it. Heck, the cup is 3/4 empty with how you left it. At least you seem to have good description, even though it needs to be expanded in a lot of places. Good luck with future writing.