Reviews for Red Brick Road
Lavenderangel chapter 40 . 2/16
Jeez, but this was the best way to spend an afternoon. I loved everything about this fic, from Jane's quiet resolve, to Van Pelt getting to kick a bit of ass. Not surprisingly, your Lisbon was my favorite. I just watched His Red Right Hand for the first time last night, and this was a far better follow up to it than what we saw on the show. Lisbon is stoic, but the wounds are clearly so fresh, and I loved how it was never overtly discussed, but always not far from her mind. God, she is so great. /fangirl

Just like the show, that end scene in the car was a surprise punch to the gut. You wrote Jane's happy confusion wonderfully, and him jolting back to reality was awful. Father!Jane isn't something I ever thought I'd want to see in fic, but this may have permanently changed my mind.

Finally, on a sappy note, I love that he was falling asleep noticing Lisbon's perfume, and that she noticed and made everyone quiet down. There's not much I *didn't* love, basically. Thank you so, so much for this piece.
itsavolcano chapter 40 . 12/18/2013
I just reread this and love it. It feels like it could have been an actual episode. Your characterizations of the team are spot on, especially Jane. Excellent work.
Krill chapter 40 . 9/26/2013
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CrazerCat chapter 40 . 3/25/2013
This was a fantastic story. I really enjoyed it!
Swedish fan chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Brilliant story telling and an exquisite language! I just couldn't stop reading :-)
Guest chapter 40 . 11/1/2012
That was absolutely amazing. I've read publish novels that are not as well done. I was completely on the edge on my seat the whole time. The story flowed and I loved the way you jumped from character to character, weaving the story together. The characters were true and the dialogue was interesting and entertaining. I absolutely loved the story and had a very hard time walking away from it.
Leanne chapter 40 . 10/10/2012
OMG that was an amazing storyline, I could visualise the episode :-) kudos to you xxx
S chapter 40 . 4/6/2012
So awesome! Wonderful job!
drj13 chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
I nominated this story for The Paint It Red Awards in the Gen Best Crime category with this reason:

"Believable mystery and exciting crime-solving adventure told smoothly from shifting POVs. The team tries to solve the mystery and Lisbon to find Jane, while Jane and a brave little girl try to survive a desperate escape from the killers. Jane may cringe from gunfire and run from explosions, but, especially after sticking with Lisbon in 3x23 Strawberries & Cream Part I, I can see him using all his ingenuity and stubbornness like this to save a child and himself. Van Pelt is great playing up to a suspect."

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CindyT63 chapter 40 . 2/12/2012
Awesome story - great writing, great characterizations, great plot!
FlavishiamXIII chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
This story is honestly really REALLY amazing! Holy crap! The way you portrayed Jane was perfect and the little girl it was all just so good! You have some serious writing talent! Have you gotten recognized at all? Honestly this is a great piece of writing! P Lease keep on writing! :)

FlavishiamXIII
NuclearHeart94 chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Thank you for this wonderful story.I just have finished it and realy enjoyed it.
Lothlorien Aeterna chapter 40 . 1/25/2012
I LOVED this!
ClaMiAl chapter 40 . 12/19/2011
Cool story! I enjoyed reading it, especially the part where Jane is all heroic. :-)
4077th chapter 40 . 11/30/2011
A nice happy ending with enough sadness to add flavor but not enough to bog it down. Shame that Nicky had to die, he really was cool. Penny was adorable and Jane was downright depressing. Overall, good job.
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