|Reviews for Sleeping Beauty and the Beast|
| lovelyfma chapter 8 . 11/7/2013
I think Phillip and Bell should get together, as a sort of epilogue. That would be a cute finish.
| Heddwyn McCloud chapter 5 . 7/19/2011
Chapter 5 was pretty good. I don't really have anything negative to say.
Chapter 6 seemed tedious. It was nothing more than dialogue for the most part. You only had two lines where there wasn't dialogue, and I thought that made this chapter a little boring.
There were also some confusing parts in there.
"Or worse," muttered Cogsworth, "Hunters might find a trophy to bring home."
That just sounds a bit condescending to me. And very out of place for the situation they were in.
"But before we go on with our search," piped up the fairy clothed in red, "A proper introduction is needed. I'm Flora. This is Fauna and this is Merryweather. We are pleased to make your acquaintance."
"My name is Adam," replied the Beast.
He already said his name. (Taking a deep breath, the Beast sighed, "My name is Adam. I am, as you may observed, a beast. I have known Rose for about two weeks now. She had visited me in the thicket, not far from here, every day. And...")
Chapter 6 was just tedious and confusing. Chapter 5 was good, though. I did enjoy the humor in chapter six, though, especially the bit about the mirror.
Good luck with your last chapters. Update when ready, but no soner than that!
| LadyKatherine29 chapter 4 . 7/8/2011
Nicely done. Got to wonder sometimes about Mal. She is a busy lady, but she should spend some time finding better minons. Hades can say all he wants about Pain and Panic. But at least they do better than Mal's minons. They just suck. I think you pretty much have captured the style of both movies. I would like to see a few more details. Some background into what got the Beauty and the Beast people out of France and to where they are. A few fash backs to fill in the blanks would be nice. your on the right track, but what you need is more details. Some more meat on the bone so to speak. You want to try and get some more of the plot worked into what your doing with your fic. Perhaps the three good fairys meet up with the Enchanterous. Perhaps Aurora gets snatched by someone else from Mal. Just want to say for what its worth your doing a nice job.
| Heddwyn McCloud chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
Thank you for fixing up chapter 2. And I liked this chapter. Keep it up!
| LadyKatherine29 chapter 2 . 7/5/2011
This is really interesting. I like your plot idea a lot. Very interaging thing to do. Sleeping Beauty and Beauty and the Beast are ruffy around the same time period. Close enough that it works for me anyway. This reminds me of both movies as well. Very much with in plot possiblitys. A very nice short read. Again enjoyed the plot idea. Good flow. Over all a very nice fic. Mell might just let this go. I mean she's going to possible cause a war thanks to this. I mean Rose moves to France. Leaving things up in the air for the joining of the two kingdoms. Which means there could be war. Or at the least hostal feelings. All the makings of a interesting out come. Belle ends up having to deal with Gaston on her own. Or her father is finally seen as an impressive intenor. Which means they move, leading to other possible things. This is really very neat. As in how Spike from Buffy means neat.
| Heddwyn McCloud chapter 2 . 7/4/2011
This chapter was off, in my opinion. It was confusing at times, and it overall flt rushed. I personally think it was a mistake to fast-forward 2 1/2 months later since it leaves out a lot of possible characterization and plot.
This other stuff is nitpicky, so please take what you find useful from this:
The first part of it was fine in my opinion.
"I'm sorry. It's just that I don't want anyone knowing my name."
...Why? It would make more sense that he'd tell her if she wanted to know, simply because he doesn't want to drive her away. Is it because he's ashamed of his name? He doesn't want her to spread his "good name" as a monster? This makes no sense.
"At first, there was much silence between the trio."
Really? I thought you mentioned earlier that " A woman, dressed in red, was barking out orders to her companions." I can't picture someone barking out order and there being silece at the same time.
That's just me, though. I personally thought it was just too rushed. I did like the first part and their interaction , though. I wish you luck with your next c hapter.
| selena1715 chapter 2 . 7/3/2011
Nice story! I didn't knew that the beast and Aurora could fit together till now. I'm waiting for more surprises! Coming from you of course! I'm wondering what's going to happen next now that the three fairies knows what's going on with Aurora! Update soon!
| Heddwyn McCloud chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Dang! You made me enthralled in a pairing possibility I never once thought possible! My goodness, I really hope you continue with this; this is great! Your characterization was fantastic (espescially Aur-oh, Briar Rose's), and your settings (in my opinion) were well done. Even the setup has a lot of potential for a strong plot.
Though I must say, you were writing in past tense the whole time, yet used the word "has" instead of "had" constantly (sorry, I'm a grammar Nazi). And if this isn't a problem, then I apologize.
Anyway, this is immediately going on alert!