|Reviews for COUPLE IN THE WOODS|
| b3j02 chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
That was dark! Great though! I didn't figure out it was James and Victoria until her red hair was described! LOL I was like oh man!
| bkhchica chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
That was disturbing and yet intriguing ;) I enjoyed the short story! I'm honestly not sure when I realized it was Victoria and James... Nicely done!
| kinsano chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
I knew it was James as soon as you called him the hunter. I liked this story in that it made me feel so much: horror for what James was evolving into; disgust for Victoria's enjoyment of it; and outrage that she was going to enable him to continue without human recourse! Good job.
| AnjieNet chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Oh, I love a woman in charge. Especially over James. What a great little twist!
| penpaperaser chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
So hot! I love! I had the nagging suspicions that it was James and Victoria when she said "hunter" and it was confirmed when I saw the "red curls" and finally the two names themselves! LOL. Awesome job!
| magmom2 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
I knew she was a vampire early on and Victoria when the red hair came out. But for some reason I never thought of James.
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Very good. Figured out who it was when she was slipping past him in the bar and he could just feel her.
| love4allpplz chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Wow...threw me for a loop...I thought it was an evil Bella...even the red hair didn't set me off cuz sometimes they say Bella's hair has reddish tints and dull human eyes so...lol. great though
| romanceaholic chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
While reading the woman's thoughts they were too sick & evil to be anyone of the Cullens'. They had to someone sadistic enough for them which left main characters such as Jane, Victoria, Heidi, etc... Since the only of those that had any male associated with them for any length of time was Victoria it led to her. Since the man was in love with the hunt James. Very well done. Sick and demented as a human with predatory skills which carried forward even more advanced with him as a vampire. Even more sadistic and evil too. Great prequel as to how Victoria and James got together. She picked him as a mate and he just wanted to be a predator for eternity never really returning her forever feelings as mate.
| Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
This is a very dark story. I love how you introduce the story with the messages. I think when the male character started hunting his prey is when I figured it was James and Victoria. What a way to get changed. I am sure that James enjoyed it.
| jmolly chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
I was divided between it being Victoria and Tanya for a bit there, but obviously she was recruiting a human to drink or become a companion. So, I knew it was Vicky when she started caressing him in the bar, but I wasn't sure if it was Riley or James until you named him.
I thought it was good. Very sexy. But yeah, don't kill off Ed anytime soon. Like...ever. lol.
Thanks for the story :D
| m7707 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
This is quite different - I really liked the premise - the whole V and J thing. Such an interesting take on what could be their story. I really liked that Victoria was the one to stalk and change James. Nicely done!
| DawnStimson chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
I just assumed it was Edward & Bella, until the part, "They were red, a deep crimson that matched her hair." Then I knew it was Victoria, and wondered if it was James she was playing with...
Good. I liked it.
| caro2lalala chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
By the last message I got that she was a vampire and my first choice was Victoria. Loved it!
| polyphany chapter 1 . 7/1/2011