|Reviews for Teed Off|
| wishbones chapter 8 . 2/23/2012
I thought this was a mirage, see I've had the flu this past week, today being the worst day. Then I see this. I thought...no couldn't be. But yes it is. Thank you, this is the funniest Joe story ever written, and one of the funniest stories ever period. I really needed it this week, thanks for updating it. I had to read it from the beginning again because it was so good.
| EasySilverDoesIt chapter 8 . 2/23/2012
Awesome, just awesome, you made my day, truly. Right amount of humor mixed with in-character characters (Hard to come by sometimes) and spectacular writing skills. I figuratively tip my hat to you, amazing job!
| RangerWill chapter 8 . 2/23/2012
(Stands up and applauds as the house lights come back on) Wonderful story. 7 thumbs up. I said it before and I'll say it again, you need to pitch this story to one of the major animation studios. They'd be damned stupid to pass up the chance to not make this. And now I'm upping the ante. Not only do I want a copy of the dvd, I want to do the voice for Beach-Head. I could have some fun with his dialogue.
(Sidenote: The studios who do the new Voltron or Wolverine and the X-men would be perfect. If not them, an anime house)
| TinySprite chapter 8 . 2/23/2012
Hahah! Leave it to the ninja to stir up trouble, no matter what. I actually kinda pity the Cobra group at the end, ya just knew Beach was itching for a reason to fight.
Hmm, really thought Duke would know better than to expect a trip to go smoothly...
| RangerWill chapter 7 . 1/26/2012
This story is hilarious. This BEGS to be made into a cartoon. And when it does I want the first copy of the DVD.
| CrystalOfEllinon chapter 7 . 1/16/2012
Beach's problems with golf are EXACTLY my problems with golf. They give you a club with any number of interesting if violent possibilities, and then tell you you can just hit the stupid little ball, and they wear stupid fancy clothes, and talk about rich people things, and then I get bored and wander off to nab the golf cart for some joyriding.
Stupid golf. Boring-ass sport.
| 88dragon06 chapter 7 . 1/15/2012
Another hilarious chapter. Can't blame Beach for wanting to smack that guy. Loved the ending bit, very funny. Looking forward to more. Keep up the great work.
| Lady Jaye1 chapter 7 . 1/14/2012
Still loving it, though I'm sure once Flint hears Clutch's story...he might not be so sure who got the lesser of two migraines.
| river95 chapter 7 . 1/14/2012
LOL! So, now everyone wants to switch partners, and everyone thinks that the other team is having an easier time of it! :D What a riot! I think Beach is getting more randy as the story goes on - maybe golf is a good game for him, if he wants to look up CG's skirt all of a sudden! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| zenbon zakura chapter 7 . 1/13/2012
hahahahaha and get hit with golf balls? lol
| N. Ockenfels chapter 7 . 1/12/2012
Oh, believe me: we appreciate your story at least as much as you appreciate reviews. And this story is just the right thing to start a morning with. A good dose of whackiness is just the thing the doc would prescribe.
I like the way you portray them: Tommy getting annoyed at payback (he is a bit of a sore loser, it's always the same with perfectionists), Clutch finally managing to tic off Scarlett and Beach finding things to enjoy and make Flint pull his hair out.
Please put up the next chapter by monday, I'll be in serious need of cheering up by midday - work trouble I know is coming. Monday is always bad right now.
| EroSlackerMicha chapter 7 . 1/12/2012
(snort) (snerk) (chuckle)
Keep up the good work. (ow, I think I bruised a rib laughing)
| Quathis chapter 7 . 1/12/2012
Oh the twists and turns of a relationship, especially one with with the polar opposite nature of Wayne and Courtney. Not sure if the Ranger likes it when he ticks her off. He seems to be having fun, but I don't think knee kicks are ever good. Except for laughs, which I did this whole chapter. Thank you for those. Until next time.
| Karama9 chapter 7 . 1/12/2012
No, Flint, you shouldn't have. Pretty sure Storm would have been even more bored without Snake around and nothing good would have come of that, considering what he's up to now. :)
That was grand, as usual. Poor Beach Head, can't even kill people and now he can't look up his girlfriend's skirt. What's he supposed to do? Play golf? Booooring.
| Phoenix51 chapter 7 . 1/12/2012
I really did miss this story.
Great chapter, please continue!