Reviews for niko bellics story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28
I stopped reading after 1st sentence, simply put god awful
WTF AM I READING chapter 1 . 2/4
Worst. Piece. Of. Shit. Ever.

Here are some tips for improvement:
LEARN HOW TO FUCKING SPELL AND WRITE WITH PROPER GRAMMAR YOU FUCKING DUMBASS! Gosh.
P.S. the plot was equally terrible as your spelling and atrocious grammar. Your kindergarten education isn't winning you any friends.
Fuck you!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
Use English! Don't say all that crap. This is not a good review
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
U honestly suck at English. And grammar. Are u high?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
None of the words are spelled right
ithyrial chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
wow gud 1 m8 420/69 euforias *tips fidora*
TsoLan chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
This might help you with the next chapter:

wiki/English_language
Mia chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Your spelling and grammar gave me cancer
Kpop-fan009 chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Your trollfic sucks more then Packie sucks Niko.

"i am cumin phrum russiaton"? I know, I'm cumming too!
Foopar chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
wtf did I just read? And why did I enjoy it so much?
The Vulture chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
You know how trollfics are usually funny? This one isn't.
Quatermain chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Go kill yourself please.
Me chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Best. Trollfic. Evar. But not really. Good though.
Dingle Bingle chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Well, this isn't very good.

I like the idea of the story, and the twist ending is quite intruiging, but the sheer amount of basic spelling and grammar errors astounds me. These are the things you shouldn't be missing out on without spell check.

Please improve.
Roger Ebert chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
I've read alot of total garbage, but I think this certainly takes the cake. Learn to spell and use correct grammar before you attempt to write a fan fiction story. is a very prestigious website with an extremely talented community, please don't put blemishes on its reputation with your trash.

Sincerely, Roger 'Cancer took part of my lower jaw and now I look like a fucking clown' Ebert