|Reviews for Star Gazing|
| mandaree1 chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
| edboy4926 chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
| The Red Star chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
While there are a few errors, this is a really good oneshot. You shine when writing romance, no matter the what the pairing is. My only real critique is that some of the sentences seem to go on a bit long. They're not exactly run-on sentences, but you might want to take a look at it. Keep at it!
Forever in the Sky,
The Red Star
| doc boy chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
i thought it was kinda cute but i didn't like the ending. i was hoping she would say that she loves him back. i hope you write a sequel for this.
PS: i see on your profile that you wrote 221 stories in total and that's very impersive. good job)
| FanficFemale chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Very good. I think they were in character enough. Nicely done.
| darthdragon chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Dude this is more of a t than a m. Nice job though.
ALL HAIL DARTHDRAGON!
| Anodite chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
I noticed a few mistakes, but for me a fanfic isn't about perfect grammar, spelling, etc. Or even a slow "build up of the plot" it's about how much I enjoyed reading it! And I really enjoyed reading this story Kyuubi. Bravo, and keep up the good work my friend. -Anodite.
| st.anger2 chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
This story is well made
| The Cretin chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
What I like about you is that you always seem to do a good job of "covering the bases." You gave logical reasons as to why Ben and Gwen's relationships with Julie and Kevin have come to a halt. Also, I like the handle you have on the characters. You captured some of the original magic. Since its all fan interpretation, I don't think any of us fans of Ben 10 will ever truly know how the Tennysons truly feel about each other. You do their romance very well and I hope you'll allow me the honor of reading more of your stories in the future. Keep rockin
| Ultimate10 chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
I have a feeling this is going to be a great story! Keep on rockin!
| MattFujiwara chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Very good oneshot. Thank you.
| The God of None chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Hey to this. Romance is your thing, not smut, not action. Work on this, you're damn good at it.