|Reviews for The Hangover|
| jenninemarie chapter 3 . 9/29/2015
Wish you finished
| Matthew Cornes chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
The description on the link caught my attention- your doing it right!
T'was then I thought why not- I'll read it.
Nice imagery (a very big area in this part)- it's a simple but interesting story which I look interested into continuing in chapter some other time :)
| AhrenFox chapter 3 . 9/11/2012
Good read, I felt myself reliving a couple of lost nights and painful mornings (nice trip down amnesia lane), I could only wish it was Abby I woke up with rather than alone. Truly looking forward to future chapters and seeing what truly happened that night. Once again you've done an excellent job of writing what I honestly think is a lost episode. More please. Cheers.
| Sophies-Welt chapter 3 . 6/24/2012
Awesome! :-) Love the idea of your story, more please!
| FWandFS chapter 3 . 3/19/2012
Lovely...I loved the way that you gave it away slowly, and when Abby sat back and laughed. My favorite, though, was your writing this little vignette:
"Abby was left in the room. In the quite, white room. The slow steady whirr of the fan, the odd car outside and Gibbs in the shower was the only sounds that greeted her ears.
It was torture, a slow and silent torture; she wanted to find out what happened the night before just as much as he didn't she? This strange and severe event had happened to both of them after all." - So beautifully written!
Holly (FWand FS)
| battlingbard7 chapter 3 . 1/10/2012
I've very much enjoyed this story so far! I love your descriptions and the thoughts and feelings going through Gibbs and Abby's minds.
I can't wait to see where you're going with this, I do hope you add more soon! I wonder what Gibbs will find on the CCTV!
On a side note, you may need to re-read over before you publish, there were a few sentences that repeated a few words. Nothing major though, I still enjoyed it thoroughly! :)
More plz. :D x
| Kris Morene chapter 3 . 10/1/2011
Interesting story! Looking forward to the update!
| SunsetsAndSweetDreams chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
I really like it so far, can't wait to see what happens.
It's very descriptive! At some points I think it might be a little too descriptive but that's just my opinion.
| Candy77 chapter 3 . 8/9/2011
| bbfan chapter 3 . 8/8/2011
Nice! I hope you can come up with a way to end it!
| Zoeeeee chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
I wanna know what happened. It's driving me crazy! And FYI - I REALLY loved the idea that we discussed a while back :) 3
| CindyCinlou555 chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Really good beginning. I can't wait to found out more about how they end up in bed together. And also how it will effect their realtionship now.
| SpecialHell chapter 3 . 8/4/2011
Hey, Velvet_Rose here :)
You already know I'm not a Gabby fan, so I'm hoping they didn't sleep together :P
Admittedly I'm only skimming the story (not even supposed to be reading fanfiction, supposed to be focussing elsewhere *wrist-slap*)
The many mysteries of Gibbs: what kind of underwear does he wear? It's right up there with How does he get the boat out? lol
Have to say, Gibbs is a lot calmer than I thought he'd be. Considering he's known for shutting down in times of awkwardness (ask any of his 3 ex-wives lol)
Also, I agree with Cath about the grammar, but I'm a total nazi about that stuff so I'll just mention it and not give you a play-by-play ;-)
| Catherine chapter 3 . 7/31/2011
Rosie, Rosie, Rosie!
(It's Cath here btw as you can probably tell!)
I really love this fic, you're excellent at paying attention to detail and including those details concisely in the story without detracting from the plot as some authors (including me!) have done occasionally! I've not seen The Hangover yet, and yet this fic is enticting me to watch more NCIS even though I OD'd on it yesterday... Bad Rosie! ;)
I love how you've portrayed both Gibbs' and Abby's thoughts within the story without putting it in first person (although I might be biased since that's my pet hate :L) and remained true to the characters.. Keep this up :P I know from experience how easy it is to turn a character AU accidentally & praise the effort you have obviously put in to avoid this happening!
My advice would be to proofread a couple more times, slowly, as I noticed a couple of misspells/typos, which while are the bane of every writer's existence, are easily corrected. I appreciate I'm very OCD when it comes to picking up misspells, typos or grammar errors- I even found some in a published book! :O but it takes very little time and if you'd like me to, I'm happy to proofread your fics :)
You'd better Tweet or text me when the next chapter is up so I can read it or I'll get DiNozzo to shoot you ;)
Well done 3
| helikesitheymikey chapter 3 . 7/28/2011
wait...what? they didn't have sex or did they?*rubs head* so confused if they did or didn't...so...what was Gibbs wearing?
where exactly did they wake up at? some kinda motel or what?
you've definitely got me intrigued.