|Reviews for The Peverell Petition|
| EACade chapter 1 . 4/23
...well. That was distressing. That was rape, plain and simple, and should be marked as such. Is it your intent to portray Harry as amoral? If so, maybe that could be part of your story description, along with an OOC tag. If not, then I'm afraid you missed your mark. A lack of fully informed consent on one or more parties in a sexual encounter of any nature is rape, and that is clearly what occurred in this scene. Please add appropriate trigger warnings.
| yuki chapter 2 . 4/23
How about the reaction the rest of the Marauder? Will there be a wedding ceremonial? And what year is Sirius now?
Update soon please
| Princess-Panda-Pheles chapter 2 . 4/16
Ohhh this is simply gorgeous, I'd love to see more, you are a bloody brilliant writer you know? It's hard to find others who write long Sirry fics. I have a deep neeeeeeed.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/30
First off, let me congratulate you on a job well done with this fic. I love the way you are writing this and how you're making the fic (in my point of veiw) in a perfect blend of reality and fictional. While you have some problems, they are not noticeable enough for someonne to throw a fit over. One problem I spotted was a grammer problem. In the first chapter, Orion said something "stuffly". The correct grammer would have been "stiffly". Another problem I saw was Sirius' home life. All that was mentioned was his mother often called him a burden, and while I admit that is terrible to say to her own son, it is not the worst she has done to him. I believe in the books, Sirius mentioned his home life was much like Harry's. Some of the finer points I found was how you evolved Harry from a shy, submissive, twig of a thing to a strong, powerful, yet still compassionate MAN. Keep writing, i can't wait to see how this playes out. I wonder how you are going to have Harry meet Sirius' friends and how he will react to Petter.
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 3/25
I really like it a lot! **
| KioshiUshima chapter 2 . 1/24
Obsessive Harry is obsessive. All dat' magic, focused on one target. I guess as long as Harry is wooing Sirius, nobody has to worry about him using it for something else. Good work, as usual. Look it me, reviewing all these old stories. ;3
| titania2811 chapter 2 . 1/5
| sar441 chapter 1 . 1/1
Please update. I love this fanfic and I want to know what happens to Harry and Sirius
| Infamous Legacy chapter 2 . 11/25/2014
Prepare to get praised!
I absolutely loved this short fanfic, it's by far one of the best I've ever read, which is weird for me to admit considering I don't usually like short fanfics all that much. But the beautifully descriptive way in which you wrote it is what made me fall in love. The passionate moments between them were pure perfection, and definitely exceeds the so-called 'sexy' scenes I've read before. On top of that, I love your idea of Harry showing his true colours, so to speak, after defeating Voldemort. Because in all honesty, I find it hard to believe that considering his history, Harry wouldn't become even a little selfish and 'dark'. So to sum up, I basically adore everything about this fanfic and I'm glad you didn't end it on a cliffhanger - like most people do - because that would have been simply unfair.
| Eli chapter 2 . 11/12/2014
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/1/2014
Please continue this story! I'm dying to know what happens! Especially James and Remus' reactions to finding out Sirius got married. Harry is super sexy too. I love that he is taking charge
| A Loyal Fan chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Dear Nia River,
Please continue your work with this fanfic. It is truly an amazing plot line and your writing style makes it all the better.
Waiting with Baited Breath,
A Loyal Fan
| FalconLux chapter 2 . 10/16/2014
teeheehe! I love this morally ambiguous uber powerful Harry. Delightful. I almost feel sorry for Sirius except for the fact that Harry really does love him more than anything and will doubtlessly cherish and spoil him every day for the rest of his life.
Wonderfully written! I wouldn't complain about another installment. In fact, I'm going to go ahead and follow this story. Just in case.
| grimmich chapter 2 . 10/13/2014
this is cute I can't wait to read more. Is harry going to follow him to school as a teacher?
| shenmi meiren chapter 1 . 10/12/2014