Reviews for Second Chances
Someone chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
I don't think she should have forgiven him. I don't think they deserved a happy ending. Both of them were cheaters and liars and his wife dying or having a child doesn't change that. It was well-written, gramatically great, but I just don't think they deserve the ending they got.
Kibachow chapter 3 . 12/8/2016
Neither deserved happiness. They are adulter and cheaters. I like the story. I feel their pain. I just don't think they deserve to have a happy ending. This pregnancy is just giving them an excuse to be together, to give it legitimacy. Without it you see people with weak moral character. In a just world, they would not find happiness. That being said, I like the parts of the story where her bitterness and anger appears. That is realistic, and very understandable. While her trying to accept him back is not. What they have is very unhealthy and what would they say to their daughter about their past.
Judyblue95 chapter 5 . 11/27/2016
I know I have some of these compilations, but don't think I have ever read this until now. I'm glad I did! I know you marked this complete, but I hope you write more of their story for future causes...
Judyblue95 chapter 4 . 11/27/2016
your use of all these wonderful songs enhances each chapter they are in. lovely!
Judyblue95 chapter 3 . 11/27/2016
and we're up and we're down. who knows where we are or how this will end! what a roller coaster ride. I do get how she feels...
Judyblue95 chapter 2 . 11/27/2016
so chapter 2 kind of changed tone and covered a lot of ground. I like where it's going...
Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
Such a sad chapter! Now I have to keep reading to see it things change...
Guest chapter 2 . 9/18/2016
That's one long ass affair. I'm conflicted here about going on or not. I'll have to see how the next few chapters go. I feel Bella is out of line 100%. The affair was wrong on both ends to begin with. A 6 year affair is very wrong. Edward should have left his wife 6 years ago. But he stayed with his wife through her illness. I'm actually glad Bella left him because of it so she could die with dignity. Yeah, I have to see where this goes. On a higher note, your writing is great. :-)
marysway chapter 3 . 9/18/2016
I did not mean to post that last comment as a guest. Sorry. I had a hard time figuring out how to sign in as I had already wrote the post. It was me. I don't like to leave a review and not know that it was me. Please forgive that of me.
Avagurl chapter 5 . 9/16/2016
Good ending.
Avagurl chapter 4 . 9/16/2016
I hope they are happy.
Avagurl chapter 3 . 9/16/2016
If T did not die , he would still be with her.
Avagurl chapter 3 . 9/16/2016
Typical cheater. I really dislike E now.
Avagurl chapter 2 . 9/16/2016
That's brilliant.
Avagurl chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Wow. So he never went after her after T died.
Actions or inaction speak louder than words.
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