Reviews for What I've Become
TheOathThatBinds chapter 2 . 5/24
please update with more chapters :o
Dark Hyrule chapter 2 . 7/10/2016
Interesting, will there be more chapters
Guest chapter 2 . 8/13/2015
Please continue
ViolentHappyChick chapter 2 . 1/3/2015
Not saying this to be mean! I don't want this to be considered a flame cause I actually like this story! I only wanted to let you know that you have the paragraph of the story up there twice! That's all. No thing rude or mean, just a heads up.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
Well I think this story is really interesting and would love to read more soon. So keep up the good work and update again soon.
yuki-onna-yuri-Yum chapter 2 . 8/17/2014
The grammar isn't very good but I still like it, I'm looking forward to more.
Black Shades of Red chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
Update! Update! Update!
Analyn Rockwand chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
. c402079/1ffd6c8/4352306/170305430_ Predalien human hybrid
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 12/13/2013
well it's Anbu not Ambu but other then that it seems between chapter 1 and 2 you've gotten better with your writing and i can't wait for you to update this fic to see where you takes it
Hikari Nova chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
hmmm not bad but you sould get a beta reader to fix your spelling errors
King-d22 chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
The correct name is anbu not ambu just saying
Gotta say narumi's new form sounds alot like a queen mothers so does that mean that your going give the same abilities telepathy being one of them able to control dreams and nightmares and empathic abilities
windfox90 chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
Very good chapter I cant wait to find out how the others will react to Narumi new form
windfox90 chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Sweet start to the story
ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Good first chapter
Soutrick chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
Good chapter
just don't understand why let her be taken back to the vilage
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