|Reviews for barricade|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/6
love it, always love a story that chooses to make little sense and yet burdens with emotion, your language use is beautiful and your story captivating, please keep writing
| PrettyGirl07 chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
I really like wartime fics like this where they're all just running together and barely have time for anything because everything comes out like a conscience, I also like the disjointed flow of it, it's still very coherent even though it is out of order. This was stunning. Seriously.
| vivafiction chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
i can't sleep so feel my wrath in your inbox. i really like wartime fics like this where they're all just running together and barely have time for anything because everything comes out like a conscience, like they don't even realize it until it's too late, and i love it. and i also like the disjointed flow of it, it's still very coherent even though it is out of order.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
It does feel broken. It's supposed to.
| underlings chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
This was stunning. Seriously. The descriptions were amazing, and I actually really liked the nonlinear-ness (is that a word?) of it. Beautiful writing.
| Little Miss Novella chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Beautiful! So tragic, but it's written so beautifully and well-written. I love your writing style!
| PenonPaperFingersonKeys chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Interesting concept you've got here! I really enjoyed it; though perhaps at times difficult to understand I rather enjoyed it for that reason.
| chandelure chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I really enjoyed reading this—it's very well done. The descriptions and order all add to the theme of war and desperation. I really really liked it.
(Ugh, whenever I try to leave a meaningful review all that comes out is ajksflblahblahblah.)
| lips of poison and wine chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
While this lacked a solid plotline, I devoured it quickly and fount it to be quite decadent. Well done.
| Bookmarked Pages chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Le-sigh. I think I'm in love with you right now. Or Dramione.
Or both, for that matter.
Either way, that was FANTASTIC and made my day.
Er-night, morning...thing. Whatever.
Still love your Dramione fics. Keep 'em comming?
| lupuslady chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
At first I was a bit confused, but then I figured it out. I really like this a lot.
| smileyfacebabe chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I like how everything's scattered in the timeline. It's confusing and chaotic, like the war you're describing.
Also it kind of fits Hermione and Draco. :D
I really really like how the usually calm and collected Hermione's thoughts are crazy and unfinished and stuttering; it gives it more personality and life to the idea that they're stuck in a war.
By any chance have you read a Dramione fic were (as Head Boy and Head Girl) Hermione and Draco get stuck teaching a class on Sex Ed? It wasn't finished, but the chunk of it that was written is well written and a good read. I thought you might like it if you haven't read it before.:)
Take care, Sara, I love you 3
| the tomato chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Darling you've outdone yourself! I love it!
Though I'm pretty much R/H all the way ...somthing about Draco and Hermione still sparks my intrest.
| shyclueless chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
It does lack a bit of sense in a few places, but it's still discernible that all are part of the same reality... Kinda?
Not as high in the list as "thirty one days in november" or one of the many one-shots of "a hundred drops of mercury" but it's good. In it's angsty kind of way.
| xfucktheglasses chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
This was so pretty and just... You make be want to write them. But there's no use in writing then if I don't know then. But stiiiiiill so pretty