|Reviews for Within Our Grasp|
| LittleMender chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
So good. The relationship between the four is like poetry. And the way they're all anticipating what will happen between and for Az and Jeb is such a nice touch.
As for the interlude between Cain and DG, when his lips "skim" over her neck from pulsepoint to ear-so subtly seductive, just the way I would imagine him to be with her. You've really kept the two of them in character. DG's so often written like a twelve year-old in a tizzy, squealing and practically talking gibberish. But you've written her like a mature twenty-something, looking to her future with her friends, including her best friend and love. And Cain is just Cain, stoic and enigmatic, revealing that secret part of himself only to her.
I hope you're planning more in this series. I'm so enjoying them. Also, from your profile pic, I assume you're a "Firefly" fan. Have you ever considered writing for that fandom? Just a thought. Anyway, as I wrote above, I'd love to read more of the "Freedom" series.
| Queen Isabella chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Love the multiple Broadway references in this one!