Reviews for Subject Beta
Guest chapter 5 . 12/9/2013
Until now its a good story.

Here is a corrected verseion of the german parts in it.

Deine Schwester, Senora, ist in Schwierigkeiten. Sie wird unter der Wüste in Nevada versteckt. Bitte, Burke, hilf ihr.
Und beurteile sie nicht nach ihrem Aussehen

Sie verstehen es nicht! Ich hab ein Ausweis! Ist doch egal, dass ich noch Minderjährig bin! Ich zahle auch das Doppelte, oder nein das Dreifache. Bitte! Sie ist meine Schwester! Sie ist in Schwierigkeiten! Bitte helfen sie mir.

Es tut mir leid, aber Regeln sind Regeln. Der Nächste.

Your translation was good but Google translates only word by word and don't cares about grammar. But just like I said before until now its a very good story.

Gut gemacht
flylikeabird22 chapter 10 . 12/28/2011
I know how you feel.

Sometimes things tend to get in the way, but this is really staring to build up.

Don't stop now.

:)
flylikeabird22 chapter 9 . 10/10/2011
Great chapters!

Senora is an awesome character. To me she seems so (and correct me if I'm wrong) human in a way.

And Burke is just too cute. I loved his grammar moment in chapter 8.

Nice job.
AussieGirlDreams chapter 9 . 10/6/2011
This is starting to get very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
:D
I'llBeStronger chapter 6 . 8/15/2011
This is an interesting story so far, very unusal but good! I would like to see where this goes. Keep writing.
Cora Sinclair chapter 2 . 7/2/2011
I think it's a great story, although I got a little confused. :)