Reviews for Things I love in this world
LurkerAlert chapter 36 . 12/31/2014
Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Wonderful story. (:
SlytherinHolmes chapter 36 . 7/20/2014
That was amazing I loved every word of every chapter! thank yo for taking time to write something so amazing!
ScifiSOS chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
So alright feedback, never do a constantly switching POV in one chapter. I went onto the second chapter and then skimmed to chapter six - a re-occuring theme to switch P.O.V's.

The reasoning is that it can get quite annoying. Only few people can pull it off honestly and even then the POV's usually change per chapter, not per paragraphs in one. I think it mostly bothers me because after chapter 3 or so it just constantly switches from harry to voldemort to harry. It's kind of like a camera spinning in circles.

And while I'm not a big fan of how it is, its actually a nicely written story for a firstie. I can't continue on because POV switching is a big pet peeve of mine. But congrats on finishing your first story and receiving many reviews on it. :)
Lavonya chapter 34 . 6/26/2014
Beautifully done story!
It was short but really good!
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Lavonya chapter 31 . 6/26/2014
And Dudley will be convicted!
Lavonya chapter 30 . 6/26/2014
Lavonya chapter 29 . 6/26/2014
I nearly cried...
Lavonya chapter 28 . 6/26/2014
Lavonya chapter 27 . 6/26/2014
Harry... _ you are an idiot... just listen...
Lavonya chapter 26 . 6/26/2014
That is /NOT/ true!
Lavonya chapter 25 . 6/26/2014
Poor Harry... Poor Tom...
Lavonya chapter 24 . 6/26/2014
Uh oh... oh no... everything is falling apart...
Lavonya chapter 23 . 6/26/2014
Ron is really /REALLY/ stupid!
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