|Reviews for mortal|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
wow so amazing - wish you wrote more.
| Nagareboshi Star chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Very intense, and well written! An amazing concept, but it seems so unfinished, more like a prologue than a one-shot.
| hama431 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
will there be a sequeal
| floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Sasuke is so mean! Lovely story though! :D
| AdotD chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Wow. I have no words. This is beautiful.
| toya-chan chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
oh my gosh!
are you sure you dont wanna put a second chapter to this?
| Blue Aidelle chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
SO VERY BAD ASS.
I love it!
I would have read a whole multi fic of this!
| SkeleTonQueeN06 chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
SEQUEL PLEASE! I'M BEGGING YOU! PLEASE WRITE THE SEQUEL!T.T
| hardtofathom chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
This is soooo good, i love your writing style and how you incorporate Sasuke and Sakura's characterization.. :) It really needs a sequel really... just saying..
| SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
This story is way too beautiful it would be
a waste if you don't make use of this plot
I cannot forget this story!
| DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
...I got shivers reading this.
| Wings800 chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Wow... that was Amazing !
| Princess Ren chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
This is wonderful! The way you incorporate fantasy to this is very good.. Shame that this is just a one-shot.. I would love to read another just for this.. Keep up the good work!
| PineapplexFudge Angel chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Oooh that was great! If u r gonna write a sequel plz tell me i would love to read it!
| neverlasting-legend chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
I liked this.