Reviews for forevermore, a poem
fairysdarkestnight chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
This caught my attention cuz I understood what the title was and was intrigued, even though I've never heard of the book. When I saw the poem (especially since it was in english) I read it. And really enjoyed it. Im not sure how it relates to the book, but your poetry really inspired me.
Sanluris chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
I haven't heard about this book, but I really liked your poem. I'm not too good at writing poetry, but I enjoy reading it, and it was great to read this poem. You should keep writing poetry if you like it, because just from reading this it seems that you should if you want to.

The "yang's yin" part caught my attention. It was a nice way to put it. Yin is seen as the darker side of things, and represents female (I'm pretty sure). Kind of like saying...you'll search for darkness, figuratively. Makes the whole poem a little mysterious. I liked the way you used word choice, for that part in particular.

Not sure if I made sense with any of that but hopefully my review was good! :)