|Reviews for Play Date|
| Casmut chapter 4 . 1/14
Oh...my...Gawd. This is the most sexiest, awesome, amazing, EVERYTHING piece of Vanaqua fanfiction I have ever had the pleasure to read. The extreme pleasure. o_o I can't believe you might not do lemons anymore, because this was just...just...my Gawd! I need MOAR! *O*
| Kari McCartney chapter 3 . 1/8
Reading this while listening to Lay it down by Aerosmith is just way too perfect
| oblivionkeeper23 chapter 4 . 6/27/2013
Are you gonna continue this?! Cuz it's so good!
| Sprinkles chapter 4 . 4/30/2013
No thank you for this story, thank you so much
This story/lemon has to be one on the best Aqua x Vantias stories, like seriously.
I LOVED the lemon
Would be possible if you could do a Roxas x Xion lemon, you have a serious gift for making great lemonade.
LoL anyway I look forward to reading more of your 'M' rated fics. C :
| Le Neko-neko chapter 4 . 3/14/2013
Coy Aqua FTW! :3
| pgould16yahoo.c chapter 4 . 1/29/2013
om nice this is an interesting lemon but here'smy only coment ven you moron (face palm)
| Piki Piki chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
this is very amazing . . I read it couple of times lately
Vanitas is so hot ! good writing :)
| bunnies chapter 4 . 4/1/2012
I freaking loved this whole story it was soooooo awesome just like how rainbow sprinkles are awesome I thought it so sweet how Vantias let Aqua listen to his ipod so she could sleep better You a deserve a truck load of reviews for brilliant lemon.
| anon chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
Rofl love it, funny ending through
| LovelySantorski chapter 4 . 12/23/2011
what a beautiful love story :D
| sky-sugar chapter 4 . 12/8/2011
Before I start my review, I just want to let you know that this is THE BEST story I have ever read. And I've read quite a few stories (closer to thousands, haha). In all honesty, it was brilliant. I could totally envision the scenes and Aqua and Vanitas were perfectly in character. Everything was so vivid and descriptive. As soon as I began reading the first chapter, I was addicted! And it got even better as I continued. Your lemon was absolutely incredible; so romantic and heartfelt, but still filled with passion, which was perfect for Vanitas and Aqua. I adore this.
Please don't ever stop writing! You are ridiculously talented and have a great gift for it. I am looking forward to reading your future works very much (and I definitely wouldn't mind reading more of this of course, if you ever decided to write more chapters or a sequel). Thank you for such an amazing story. Have a lovely day! :)
| Passion-Chan chapter 4 . 8/26/2011
LOL I died laughing at the end! Poor Ventus just doesnt get story was nicely done,and I know what you mean when you say reading or writing lemons make you feel hot and bothered,it just gives off that weird keep up the good work!
| Miheart Sundae chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
This is really good. I thought you portrayed the character's friendship perfectly... I have yet to play the game, so I have no idea what Aqua is like. But, from what I've heard, this is fitting. And very cute.
| xXPrincessMXx chapter 4 . 8/7/2011
Hello there, Alacquiene... I'm really sorry I did not review earlier...
But you know, I always get kind of... uncomfortable and embarrassed while reading lemons...
But well, since it was your story and all, and I prayed that I would survive xD I read it. Completely.
I was having my breakfast in the first chapter... and I quickly stopped when I read what Aqua was doing... I could not picture Aqua doing that, and I did not WANT to picture that, but I did. So I skipped breakfast and read on.
Chapter three... I had to stop some moments there to run around the room xD
Chapter four was hilarious, of course.
I love Ventus. Ven, you hear me? I LOVE Y- well you get it xD
For you first time, you really did this well... maybe a bit too well, because I felt all... weird after reading it xD
I can only say that you're good at this, and if you liked, you should write more of this.
If you're just like me... then... don't continue xD
Sorry for this oddly long review, and all the best!
| hdfkhdkfjas chapter 4 . 7/24/2011
I just died a little inside, great story! X]